Reviews for Revenge
VootCruisin chapter 2 . 1/18/2007
Wow. I can't wait until the plot is more evident, you describe everything so well, the way you do POV is awesome.
andalitebandit-6 chapter 2 . 1/17/2007
Nice counter POV with Dib! I like how you framed it with Dib's idea of the flavor of victory. And the idea that they need each other to destroy themselves. What a concept! Such a fresh read from the filth that frequents FanFiction. Thank you!
andalitebandit-6 chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
I had trouble figuring out who the first person was here. The "I tried to warn/save them" sounded Dibish, then the 'I am the one who marked him with my claws" sounded like Zim. At the end I think it was Zim since he likes to refer to himself in 3rd person, yes?

I find it ironic that the story should begin with the end. This is the first story I've read where the tables are so thoroughly turned as to put Zim in the crazy house while Dib rains doom on his home planet. I was enraptured from beginning to end! Kudos I say! :D
avatarjk137 chapter 2 . 1/17/2007
How dark and eerie. It was well written, though. Good work!
VootCruisin chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
oh my.

I must read more. I thought it was Dib in first person, but I think I am wrong.

:) I can't wait.
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