|Reviews for Paradise|
| Girl-of-Action chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
This is a wonderfully written piece! Thank you for sharing and I hope you right more season 0 in the future. :)
| kage kitsune 14 chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
| cen.wawanakua.9 chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
te apoyo con el tipo de reloj dio miedo
| MangaAndAnimeFairy chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
I need more affection than you know , you know I read this story years ago and I just know noticed you wrote some sentences backward
| Kurogawa Yumi chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
Oh, it's hard to find such a well-written story about the season zero setting. I liked it!
Keep up the great work,
| Kitsune-ohime-sama chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
LOL! I thought the Season 0!Yami was downright creepy, witty, evil, and sexy.
I was constantly ranting about the fact that most of the time, he had a smile on his face. It was creepy just to see it.
DON'T EVEN GET ME STARTED ON THAT WATCH GUY. I was staring at Yami like WtF when he was walking away with the watch. I think I said something along the lines of:
"Yami, you're fucking walking away...from a guy who's turning into a clock...with a FUCKING smirk on your face. I don't know why I think you're sexy, but that...was...just...what the hell."
And then...when Saadi entered Yugi's mind and opened Yami's door. I screamed and shouted:
"REALLY YAMI! YOU JUST HAPPEN TO BE STANDING THERE? YOU HAVE FUCKING GLOWING, RED EYES YOU CREEPER! YOU FUCKING SEXY CREEPER! CREEPER!"
Needless to say...I was and still am scared of Yami, though I do admit that his penalty games have changed from close to killing everyone and anyone, to just witty things to trick people into insanity or feeling insecure.
Love this fic, because it just reminded me of everything that scared me of Yami. :) Something definitly worth faving.
| Kaaki Shaman chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
Wow, this is strangely... Cute. .w. I dunno how.
But, do you plan on continuing this? 'Cause it doesn't say "completed"... Just wondering. .w. I'm gonna add it to my watch list anyway, just in case but I'll remove it if this was simply a one-shot deal. :)
| Silverwing5566 chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
This was really well written, you really pulled off season 0 yami perfectly, slightly crazy lol. Little yugi was perfect too. Awesome job :)
| Wakingtoadream chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
Amazing ;D pure amazing...
| DarkShadowStalker chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
All I can say is: Awesome. Pure awesome :D
I love how natural Yami and Yuugi's conversation was, and how you managed to keep them in character (Hard to find that nowadays, lol)
Season Zero Yami is amazing, btw XD
| Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
Wow... This is one of the best stories I've ever seen for the YGO fandom, especially my favorite season: 0!
My gosh, you got the Yuugi AND Yami of this season perfectly! *U* You gave them a sweet meeting and interaction, too, and that's one of the things I love the most about it. Besides, even if this is INSANE!Yami, you gave him a very gorgeous human side to him, especially with Yuugi, and I ADORE that! *U*
This is absolutely gorgeous! *U* I really don't know what else to say this, but gosh...this is BEAUTIFUL! *U* *U* ROCK ON! *U* *U*
| twinklestar148 chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
oh god. i am such a dumb shit D: it took me about 10 reads before i figured out that "wonk uoy naht noitceffa erom deen i" is "i need affection" backwards. jeebus. i blame it on high school. the weeks left me all frazzled -.-'
anyway, enough about me. let;s talk about you and this lovely piece of work :) i love this fic! it flows nicely and I LOVE psycho!yami. it just makes my day to read a season zero fic and this one didn't disappoint.
you are an amazing authoress.
i'm pretty sure i've already favorite-ed this but i'll just make sure...
LASTLY! please please update office space or game start. i love labyrinth and i love the humor of office space... and i checked out the picture its based off of and i thought it was extremely adorable :)
| yugifan chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
love it...I like how ur writting. If u make longer fic of YugixYami I definatly review )
| HoukaDoragon chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
Sanctuary was a nice affect, however, you spelled affection wrong backwards. Just thought I'd let you know. Very nice story.
| Tamsin M chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
(Shudders). Wow, that was creepy, in a good season-zero-y way. Very well characterised.