Reviews for The Gilded Lily
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 80 . 5/27/2012
Aw this was a very special ending which I really loved. It was a great finale and I really think this fic came into it's own towards the end. Hope you're still writing all this time later xxx
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 79 . 5/27/2012
I didn't mind the jump to the children at all but then it did go very fast after that. It was so sad reading about poor little Liberty, although that wa very fast, Lily knowing even as the nurse took her, when she was just really hot, that she wouldn't survive and her room wouldn't be hers much longer! And telling James and the queen she was sick and then the next second she was gone. I think more detail and slower would have been better and improved on what was already good. I liked that Sirius named his son James and it was so sad that he lost most of his family. I liked the line about him and lily having what the other wanted. The jump to the secret keeper bit was quite sudden too. I did like j and l discussing raising their son normally, although I wonder how they managed to be allowed to do that!
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 76 . 5/27/2012
Aw perfect! Are we gonna find out about what's inside the locket?
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 75 . 5/27/2012
Haha really liked this chapter, it had a bit of everything and especially lovely moments with LJ. That bit about your highness was so funny!
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 74 . 5/27/2012
Aw this was very sweet and I liked the bit in the dorm although I thought they were gonna be answering questions for a yearbook or something!
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 73 . 5/27/2012
Aw this had some dealt sweet and funny moments. It seemed a bit random bringing in a new character at this point but I am interested to see what you get up to with that.

Two little things, thesises are more a university thing here than a school thing, and also school doesn't let out for summer till July, early July for private schools, late july for state schools! We have such a short summer lol!
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 72 . 5/27/2012
Finally the story! Was wondering when we were gonna hear it.

But again I feel like you missed out a chunk! What happened with voldie-scum? Why did he leave? When did james' leg get broken? How come they are just there without V trying to kill them any more?

I really loved the story and their conversation, it wa really touching
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 70 . 5/27/2012
Ooh so she doesn't know it's her child! I got confused with the locket thing. I am loving that they are figuring things out and nervous about the latest turn of events!
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 68 . 5/27/2012
This was funny and I loved the prince James watch and the idea of them arguing over and over in different places. Oh and Remus reading Witch Weekly! Two little things which I'm sure you know by now but I am a pedant and can't ignore: ethnicities. Plural, no apostrophe! They're for when there are letters missing or for belongs to. Also I think it's duck a l'orange x
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 67 . 5/27/2012
This was kind of a random interlude, maybe it would be better explored in a one shot, I think it could be really funny. I loved the album title!
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 66 . 5/27/2012
Why does she have to back to original lily? Just to protect herself from everything and all the rumours? But she wasn't happy like that. Why can't she just be herself?

Why is Lily looking at James with hatred? Surely she couldn't expect him to not be angry at the deception?

I like that Sirius is supporting her and that she came back but I want to see the present!

Also I didn't realise that Lily knew that the will referred to her and James' son, versus it just being James' son. Or did she not realise till the man said about the heir and the locket? Why did you have that bit in the letter obscured? Would it have said about it being the true love of the heir?
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 65 . 5/27/2012
Wow, I feel like something has changed, your fic seems different all of a sudden and better and I am enjoying it even more!
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 64 . 5/27/2012
Ooh I love the twist of him finding these boxes and her rushing in. Awesome!
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 62 . 5/27/2012
Lol this chapter was pretty funny, I liked the girls figuring it out although it was crazy when lily just shouted it! It was a good relief chapter but omg James isn't coming?
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 61 . 5/27/2012
Okay, I understand now. Sorry I was impatient She was gone 9 months! Still a bit short to be unrecognisable. I'm so frustrated that he never wrote to her before and find it a bit weird that she is doing this double life thing and writing to him and being there. It all seems so crazy.

Also, did James take 1 or 2 years off, I canzmt remember what you said at the start of the fic and then I was confuse about how long he'd known her.

I'm glad to hear she will be trying to return but I think it could go horribly wrong with everyone being upset she lied to them so blatantly.

I want to keep reading as I'm intrigued so I hope that shows that although I'm very straight in my reviews I am meaning to be complimentary too.

Also I checked and canzmt believe you wrote this 10/11 years ago! Wow! Apologies for rambling reviews about something so old! I know I would feel awkward with someone going on about my old writing!
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