|Reviews for Thoughts of the Mercenary Fayth|
| BeautifulxxDisaster chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
That was a excellent take of Yojimbo's point of view!
It never occured to me before this that there might be a real reason for Yojimbo being the way he is.
| Pied Flycatcher chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
Interesting. A very reflective piece and the style suits it well. You have a few run-on sentences - in the second to last paragraph for instance. But I think the ellipsis does work for this kind of stream of consciousness writing.