|Reviews for For the Last Time|
| Blasphemous Contessa too lazy chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
this is just about the saddest thing I ever read.
| lily moonlight chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
Oh this was devastating. So well written, I was immediately drawn to the characters and the story, and even though I don't know them, I feel like I do at the end after just a short stay in their company. I could choose so many lines I loved: 'he had told her that time gained momentum with years'.
Your character descriptions are marvellous, so vivid in just a few details, and the details that show how much a character has changed for another, 'Her mind held a portrait of this beloved man and it was about to be shattered.'
I felt so much warmth for Da, and his indominatable spirit, he is still acting for others, but not for much longer. The last line hit hard, 'and laugh she did, one last time.' Beautiful.
| Edwardjustproposed chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
i am crying! that was really good! -sob-
| Infallible.Mirage chapter 1 . 1/15/2008
-tear- I loved the way you wrote about memories, that you imagine things differently as time goes on~
| Goddess of Purple Squirrels chapter 1 . 7/15/2007
Oh wonderful, wonderful.
I'm gonna cry...
| Mage of Dragons chapter 1 . 7/12/2007
aw... that's so sad :(
| nativewildmage chapter 1 . 1/26/2007
You're making me cry...but other than that it was superb. I've always avoided thinking about George's death, seein' as I love him so much...
| kotokodainetohru chapter 1 . 1/25/2007
George has always been one of my favorite characters (tear) and now he just dies(tear tear sniffle) with one of my other favortie characters, Aly, and it was so good and so sad and (tear tear tear tear tear sniffle sniffle) (sigh) yeah.
| Donna di Scalotta chapter 1 . 1/21/2007
What's a credenza? This was quite lovely - isn't Aly so cute? - but I guess you didn't have any major plot that you wanted this to follow up with. What a pity.
Toodles and please leave a review if you can.
| muppetmadness chapter 1 . 1/20/2007
Lol. That was bittersweet, so sad and yet amusing. Loving it as always.
| Numairs Wild Magelet chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
oh... that was sad...but i think george would go out like that. perfect, and well written!
| AlannaXJon4ever chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
as much as i hate the A/G pairing...i still like george..i mean after all he did no harm...(except marry alanna-lol im joking)..and this was just so sad *sobs...to see your dad die...
| Cursiveismything chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
so godd, yet sad...keep writing!
| idyllic nocturne chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
Wah. I don't think I'll ever stop crying when I read these. They're too sad!
Great writing, though.
| sarramaks chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
So simple and so moving. Really good piece of writing!