Reviews for The Archway of Destiny
Guest chapter 21 . 11/30/2019
Also, i wonder whom wins in a battle: ur-didact vs naraku. My vote is to ur-didact, because in halo 4 and in a halo comic sequel of halo 4, the didact shows be a truly powerful forerunner, capable to defeats easily to the spartans, including master chief, without spill a sweat drop, even to the point of makes that master chief looks like a weak opponent, even when our hero had the support of the blue team formed by other spartan super soldiers, the didact still stomped them like if they were nothing, this guys is definitely someone whom you wouldn't want as enemy.

While naraku, during his battle against the spartans and soldiers of UNSC, he only keeps an stalemate with them than overpower them easily and quickly, showing that despite to be a powerful demon, naraku isn't capable to stomp the spartan super soldiers like the didact did it, implying that his poweress is inferior to the warrior servant forerunner. Besides, if the didact was armed in this battle with one of the forerunner weapons, he could be capable to disintegrate naraku, making him capable to destroy the demon.
Guest chapter 21 . 11/30/2019
I wonder if the fact that the spider scar in the back of james, can be implies a connection between naraku and the flood. I mean, considering that onigumi, the original form of naraku, became a demon to absorb hundreds of demons, what if one or some of this demons were actually flood forms hidden among the demons. This could make that naraku became like a new flood form, and the spider scar in him and his minions could be like a mark related to flood, like a dead gives away that naraku is connected to the flood, aware or unaware.

And regarding the attempts of the UNSC for kill naraku, while their weapons are advanced, this kind of guns haven't the power to destroy this demon, only kagome with her sacred spiritual powers can vanquish naraku. At least that the UNSC counts with forerunner weapons, as this guns are designed to destroyed the biomass flood, this arsenal could be capable in theory to destroy naraku too.
jeanymarie99 chapter 32 . 2/9/2018
I really think this fanfiction takes place between HALO universe and Inuyasha Universe.
7F chapter 6 . 12/17/2016
But it is that too many exposes Classified sensitive information that regard on Forerunner and The Flood to otherworldly civilians that just meet in five minutes? Highly unlikely that given how ONI are paranoid to keep their information form civilians or friendly aliens
Spartan-Kun chapter 32 . 8/17/2015
So it's been a few years since your last update. I really like the story as a whole. It has a lot of things I was looking forward to when I first started to read. And you've managed to create very likable characters. I hope you've not quit writing and that work on this can continue soon.
jujubug712 chapter 1 . 7/7/2015
This is good except...sorry you're going to hate me... with dialogue every time a new person speaks a new line starts. So with the conversation at the end there should be an 'enter' after each of them speaks a sentence. Does that make sense? Other wise you have a great first chapter to your story! :)
gokuchiefkarkat chapter 32 . 5/29/2014
dammit man, you need to continue this, this is the only halo inuyasha fic on here and it's damn good
SpiritoftheOrchidFlower chapter 1 . 1/23/2014
While I will continue reading this because I am very curious on how you plan on making it work, I feel the need to point out two grammatical errors you keep making. I swear, I honestly am trying to ignore them, but. They. Wont. Leave. Me. Alone! Argh...! Anyway, the first is that, every time a person different from the one that just spoke begins to speak, it gets bumped down to make the next paragraph. (i.e. instead of "Hi sis, how are you?" "I'm good, thanks. Just a little tired." "Oh really? that's to bad." It's:
"Hi sis, how are you?"
"I'm good, thanks. Just a little tired."
"Oh really? that's too bad.")
Which leads me to the second thing. The punctuation put at the end of someone speaking (i.e. comma, period, exclamation point, or question mark) or if it is split around some other statement (i.e. The girl dropped the tray for a third time. "Damn it!" she cried, "What is up with me today?!") go INSIDE the quotation marks as I did in the above example.
Please don't take this as a flame as it is meant as friendly, constructive criticism and I just thought it was worth pointing out since they are both important English Grammar rules.


PS. If I get rather attached to this story within the next couple of chapters, I will probably ask if you would like a Beta. Just to let you know -I don't know- ahead of time I guess. If you're even paying attention to this story anymore since you haven't done anything to it for almost exactly three years. I wonder.
inukag94 chapter 18 . 11/3/2013
Just so you know the actual name for the elites is the sangheili, brutes are jiralhanae, grunts are uggoy, and the jackals are kig-yar
Dante Okami chapter 32 . 8/16/2012
i feel you when i first played dead space i damned near pissed myself twice but now i look at the necromorphs and laugh on the zealot diffculty and say is the best the marker can do any way hopeing for a update soon
Spritefyre chapter 32 . 6/5/2012
Oh my gosh, I loved your story, I *squee*'d a whole bunch throught what I have read, and cant wait to see what will happen to Inuyasha, and at the school!

I thought they were in actual danger

also a question- Will Miroku EVER show them the wind scar?
Dilis Sapherox chapter 31 . 7/23/2011
hopefully you can update soon or vey many chapters because its been almost half a year since the last chapter you uploaded and this is a great story.
Dilis Sapherox chapter 32 . 7/22/2011
please continue this story is awesome its the only inuyasha halo crossover i can find thats good.
LeroytheOtter chapter 32 . 7/18/2011
Well, after binge reading the whole thing, I liked it. (I enjoyed it quite a bit actually.) And I hope that you will continue writing this.

Anyway, I've subscribed to it, and will be waiting for more.
Ark Angel H F B chapter 32 . 4/25/2011
Hum... _... _... more?
119 | Page 1 2 3 4 .. Last Next »