finily, took me four days to a week or two to catch up in the story and I really like it, miner grammer errors i've notested but nothing big, persanely I liked the weapon detill in the story, esspesaly the sparton laser and the ship details.

can't wait for the next chapter

Well, this brings to mind many thoughts, not least of which is since Kagome's time is supposed to be modern day, will the halo games exist there? They could very easily, and depending on the intended mood, it could work very well.

Wow, Inuyasha will be so jealous of James!

Maybe it could force him to follow them to the modern era?

this is really good. Unfortunately, as has been my recent pattern, I have absolutely nothing of worth to say, though. Sorry bout that.

This is a really good story. Don't stop. Are you really joining the military?

You know what? I laughed pretty hard when I saw this cross over. Imagine my surprise when it was actually good. Kuddos to you sir, for pulling this off.

Aw~man I was hoping it to be james?kag but this is good I was wondering if i get around to it to borrow your Halo/Inuyasha crossover thats okay?...

Long is right! I was wondering when you would update this story and FINALLY, here it is. Long time no talk, buddy!

Hey, I see no errors here to detract from the coolness of the story! Your action was spot on and the romance was nicely placed too. I dunno how else to help you, your writing has VASTLY improved!

And glad you got a co-writer! That should help quite a bit.

I can't wait for the next one!

Kim

great story, although there is a few spelling errors, get that sorted out ok? Thanks and make the chapters longer, _

Okay, first things first. I just bought a book today and this chapter has the same EPICNESS in scale to that book! EPIC! Simply EPIC.

MOAR VIOLENCE! XD In other news...on with the review.

You've gotten better my friend. Your spelling, grammar, and overall writing style has greatly improved! Good stuff. Not much more to say however...it's been a medicore day for me...sorry. ;;

So the Spartan was in memory of your great uncle huh? Good to hear you can pay tribute to him without being so jingoistic about it, like so many others I have seen... that's good. :)

Good luck on your Marine training! Once a Marine, always a Marine! Salute!

Kim

PS: Tell Inuyasha and company to duck next time. ;)

When are you going to update this story? I enjoy reading as do many others.

Are you going to update? This is good

Hey, I enjoy reading this story very much. I just got a 360 and Halo 3 for christmas and I haven't figured out how to set it up for a wireless connection. Can you help me with this? Anyway, I give your story a 4.5 out of 5 and I added it to Kagome Higurashi Crossovers.

Romance is always good. It's been a long as well my friend.

Honestly, I gave up on Halo now. The third one ruined my love for it. The short campaign, revamping of the character to mere fanservice, mediocre deaths of Sarge and Keyes (SRSLY! WTF?), those "Flood that can suddenly talk English with use of translations", and all the unanswered questions...

But at least your story is a good refreshing look on the human side of Halo. Not some "propaganda super soldier killing alien sissygirls". lol

Heh. Oh well, opinions change... ;;

Fighting!

Yideungbyung Kim

I don't know if you've played halo three, but it shows a chance of throwing the cheif in. Cortana wouldn't last fifty years without going rampent. The museum peice was a nice touch, but seeing that fifty years has passed since the end of the war, I'd imagine the Sanghile(Elites) would like to honor the humans who freed them of the prophets through intergalactic trade between the two species, so they are possible to put in your fic. This fic is still very good, Looking forward to your next update!