Reviews for Dust in the Wind
crookshies chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
i liked it very much
Kurogani chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
nice but short
M-dono chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
I loved this! You portrayed Hinata in such a good way. You kept her personality so in character, because usually, when people portray her; all they can do is copy her speech patterns. But you on the other hand did more than that. That's what makes the story so unique in my eyes.
kenshinlover2002 chapter 1 . 2/25/2007
That was really nice and very well written. I liked it.
Shi-Long Begone chapter 1 . 1/29/2007
Yayness! I loved this story! "Dust in the wind"... I like that line!

"God damn you," muaha! Hinata curses!

Anyways, good job on this!
NocturneD chapter 1 . 1/20/2007
*waves sasuhina flag*
greenlee chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
Very nice.
Acclivity chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
. Can't wait to see more! I like your style, though you do need to work a bit more on your grammar.