|Reviews for Harvest|
| Zanzangoose chapter 2 . 4/12/2007
That was a short chapter, you could of added more. But then it was good that it was short, as I don't have much time anyway. I think this chapter was kind of a soft one, if you get what I mean. Nothing extreme happens, but it opens up just a little. You have a very good sense of empathy. Keep on updating!
| Zanzangoose chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
This is different, I'll say that. And you said it would be short? Seems like it could turn out to be a good short story I'd suppose. Your chapter is nice to read, the characters so far are just as nice. I know it's a first chapter but not much really happened, I hope there would be some action in the next one! The way the chapter ended was clever though, as it makes me want to know what Celia means by that last sentence.
_ I think it's off to a good start, keep on updating!