Reviews for Dirty Laundry
thentherewasIA chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
And in the next few months/years... BOOM! So many uchiha-haruno babies!
SasuSaku Forever and Ever chapter 1 . 6/29/2009

wow. xD
SynysterVamp chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
LMAO! First actually funny fanfiction I've read where the characters weren't OOC...Seriously...
Romancelover1321 chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
Wow is all I have to say. Good job.
angelaurora7777 chapter 1 . 12/24/2008
ooh! they gonna get it on!

love the story! it's so cute and funny!
Pretty little One chapter 1 . 12/1/2008
Nami-Lass chapter 1 . 11/25/2008
I couldn't stop laughing! I had to slap my mouth shut from a loud laugh! Nice!
inner soul chapter 1 . 5/26/2008
Wow! This was so funny! LOL! FOr you to say that humor does not agree with you, this fic is actually kind of funny, and sweet, and funny! Haha! You were able to voice out, through Naruto, males' curiosity about females' laundry. Moreso, you were able to do this by maintaining the characters', uhm, character. I actually can't stop laughing, especially when Naruto started rummaging Sakura's laundry, and when Sasuke got caught at the wrong time by Sakura. The way you described the scene, especially Sakura's and Sasuke's embarassment, and Naruto's snickering from the sidelines, was so hilarious. I also liked the way you wrote the last part, Sakura taunting Sasuke, and him getting back at her, and then finally leading to them indirectly confessing their attraction towards each other.

Moreso, you have very few spelling mistakes. In fact, I only remember one, the sware instead of swear. It was probably even a typographical error. Moreso, it did not affect the idea you were trying to convey, so no worries.

(Okay, this is getting too long, but hey, I like this story!)All in all, I like this story. And I can't stop laughing until now! I hope to read more of your stories! GOod luck! :D
extraordinaire chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
Aw! Cuteness!
xiMaryFairy chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
hehe nice ]
WriterPoet chapter 1 . 7/16/2007
Less than 6 hours?

That's a pretty long time. Haha.

Good job.
ohwhatsherface chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
"...Sometimes I wonder if you’re asexual or if Orochimaru just made you straight."

That one made me LMAO.

lilxcutexmonstah chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
okay, now i'm seriously convinced that you're the one whose stories should be reviewed... o.O;; these are WAY better than my fanfic. D it was amazingly written. again, better than mine. XD

oh no, i'm starting to get jealous! O_O in fact, i'm so jealous that i lost the inspiration i had to finish the rest of my fanfic. D jk. i loved the fact that naruto was in character. perfect. i had no trouble at all at imagining him doing those things. sasuke and sakura? they were REALLY in character, except maybe in the end, but any fluff with sasuke in it is out of character. XD it was hilarious.

and i just noticed... you're a year older than me! XP that'd make you a freshman, going into tenth grade. what's a tenth grader called again? i never really got to memorize the terms.. juniors.. seniors.. sophomore.. i never did get the order. are you a junior now? o.O;; enough with my blabbing, i'm looking forward to more of your lovely fanfics! if only i can finish mine before vacation.. -_-;;
Whisperdale chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
HAHAHA LOLOL! Hehe, I can just imagine Sasuke and Naruto having an underwear fight... And I just about suffocated when Naruto noticed the "lightsaber"... xDXDXDXD

Oh god, if I was Sakura... I would've killed myself. Or them. 8D
urbanbear chapter 1 . 4/4/2007
what if he was feverishly aiming his lips towards Sakura’s...but missed!

hahahahahaha lol. ur story is hilarious!
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