Reviews for The Watcher's Apprentice
Guest chapter 13 . 9/23
you're very inconsistent. a few chapters back, you declared harry able to read and write at his age level, thus why he spent less time with Katherine. Now he 'still has trouble reading' sometimes?

You had him all caught up on math via giles, and that taken on by someone else when giles left, he passed the test to get into the school, then you casually mention harry doesn't know how to do long division.

So is he educated to the proper fucking level or not?
Guest chapter 1 . 9/23
Your nym tons is waaay too old here. She'd only been an auror for a year or two when harry met her summer after year 4, so she' graduated only a year or two before harry's first year. Not before he was 6.
Veronica McClure chapter 13 . 9/4/2018
OK, pls keep up with this story! U simply can't leave it where u did; u must at least have Hermione finally write her parents so she can find out that Harry Potter was the Harry living a few doors down from her parents' place!
Veronica McClure chapter 8 . 9/4/2018
Where was Harry's Hogwarts letter?! Sure Hermione being born in September 1979, she would've received hers before Harry, but Harry should've still received his, and they would b leaving together?! Unless, the dumbass "adult" wizards thought that since they couldn't find him, DE's must have and made his letter pointless?
Dennis Wayne Daugherty chapter 13 . 11/2/2017
Please update soon i love this story
kewr69 chapter 13 . 7/31/2017
Great story so far
draco7347 chapter 13 . 6/10/2017
really love this awesome story cant wait for brand new chapters
Fallow53 chapter 13 . 12/26/2016
xxx Kudos xxx : )
And another year gone? Will the next chapter be another 7 years? Pity that it's a good story
SortingHat chapter 13 . 9/6/2016
And the beat goes on. The author goes MIA probably wasting her life playing Candy Crush on her smartphone thinking it's better then a computer.

"Look at me I've got a phone!" and is dumb struck playing Candy Machine or whatever the hell that game is called as the rest of the industry tries to imitate the f-k book style and forces us all to accept it or be rid of.
SortingHat chapter 13 . 9/6/2016
In reality oblivirating or whatever you call it is more dangerous then just telling the truth. The more a person's minds is messed with the more dangerous it is as God designed the brain to not be lied to.

People who make a habit of lying can and do damage themselves to the point they have split personalities often to the point of mental illness and if you are one to believe in reincarnation then that energy will be sent to the next life.

The bible clearly says the sins of the father passes down onto 4 generations and I really doubt the bible would make such a point like that unless it means reincarnation. This often is where traditional Christians get stumped and screwed up.
SortingHat chapter 12 . 9/6/2016
Ouch! Hospital trip! Time to call Nintendo for the ambulance. Wii U. Wii U. Wii U Wii U!
SortingHat chapter 11 . 9/6/2016
3000 Calories is right. This fic would be better as an original fic on Fiction Press dot com. Ever been there? It actually looks a lot like this site including same layout and all but for original stories like original fantasy or paranormal.

This fic would fit in the paranormal over there or maybe horror but then again there isn't a whole lot of horror in this so I am sandwiched between the two.
SortingHat chapter 11 . 9/6/2016
That's how Liberals act. High and might stealing from the poor in the form of hand outs to keep the blacks enslaved in the *system* except for the smart blacks who actually DO own a business or get somewhere in life and then are hated by the media because they are not following the rest of the *sheep* thinking all the same.

Donald Trump is right our economy is fake but those of us who are awake don't need him to tell us that. The only reason we don't have a bigger crash is due to the interest rates being kept artificially low and China propping things up so we will keep buying.

If China called our debt there would be no one left to buy and they too would go bust making all the fiat money systems of the world get KO'ed.
SortingHat chapter 9 . 9/6/2016
I don't see Mr Berry's jokes odd. He was just teasing about the weather conditions and trying to show some excitement.

I actually semi-frequently look at Net Weather UK forums (a very active forum in fact rare these days) because they have a learning section for beginners to show charts and places to hold discussions about different aspects to metorology.

My favorite was that I learned about the best *snow setups* for UK and what often makes snow systems fail to materialize. What makes things fail to materialize and some dramatic *no snow* events where they thought it would snow.

and how to not be stupid about it which had weather chart examples highlighting positions of troughts (T) and high pressure rights (H) and special highlights for the topic.

There' a site in German that has weather charts all the way back to the early 1800s that shows temp profiles and weather positions.

I also learned the best position for heat waves in the summer (2003 or the mid 90s) and the dark damp summers they can get such as the 2008-2010 era for more recent dreadful summers which temps barely got to 25C for any length of time with THE HIGH temps often failing to top 20C.

Did you know that high pressure doesn't always bring clear sunny skies and there is a mechanic behind it?
SortingHat chapter 8 . 9/6/2016
The people who go on and on about the street skills or too afraid to leave the *script fic* model are usually extremist liberals who want everybody to be the same just like them flashing off their riches in the process.
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