Reviews for Behind A Mask
Spooge13 chapter 10 . 8/9/2011
What an interesting story! It's so different from anything else I have read. I'm bummed that it's not finished and that it's been sitting for so long...I do hope you'll come back and finish it one day-especially since it is at its climax!
Bradykins chapter 10 . 7/8/2011
This story is so suspenseful! But I swear if you don't finish it soon I'll just say it ended like "V For Vandana" because this really seems to be following that movie.
xXxMimi-ChanxXx chapter 10 . 6/24/2011
love this story so far, but i just wish you would update soon~
blknblupanther1 chapter 10 . 2/25/2011
Why have you not continued this story? It's so intriguing! Please try to continue! D:
Waka chapter 10 . 1/15/2011
Some of the stuff that you've put in here is contradictory to the history of the manga. I'm just saying and pointing this out since I don't know if you had already known this. Nonetheless, I have enjoyed your story and am looking forward to more chapters A.S.A.P. Keep writing!
flipomatic chapter 10 . 8/26/2010
I like this story even though I found it vastly creepy
overtanned chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
I wanna read the next chapter :( please update!
Resha Tsubaki chapter 10 . 2/6/2010
Your story is great... Please, the next chapter !
MarzLuvzCandyz chapter 10 . 1/16/2010
Oh man...I LOVE this story. Usually I won't bother with reviews (because i'm too lazy for that), but if it'll get you to write more chapters then why not.

This is some of the best Royai I've ever read, and I've read a lot of it. I really like the way that Rainey messes with Riza. It makes things interesting. Also, sorry but Rainey really creeps me out.

Anyway, great story. I hope you write more of it. :D
Nezume-chan chapter 10 . 12/29/2009
OMg! my face lit up when I saw this in my inbox that you updated. I love this story! Yes, please do continue! :D
xxdarknessxfallsxx chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
So, I need to fav this and come back to it because I have no time of my own to read anything I want to. I liked this introduction and I enjoyed the flirtatious-ness of Roy and Riza. You say this isn't going to be like the other Royai's? I can't wait to read and find out how.

Eh, until I read more I don't have much more to say. I think I shall, though, since your authors notes are suggesting something of fantastic proportions~
JMee chapter 9 . 10/7/2009
I normally don't review because it takes me out of my way, but I absolutely COULD NOT refuse. This is the best RoyAi I've read so far, and one of the best Fullmetal fanfics I've read so far. I love the way Rainey's playing with Riza's psyche and how Roy's being forced out of his comfort zone. It's very intense, and a good plot altogether. Will she become an assassin for Rainey? Will she seriously fall into the delusion he's creating for her? I really like your OC as you can tell, and I'm enjoying seeing him play with everyone else's mind. Also, how did he come to choose Riza in particular? He must've been watching her for a long time...

Anyway, AWESOME job on the story and especially on the best OC I've seen in the 6 years I've been into fanfiction.
4UNE chapter 9 . 8/27/2009
If you do not update, I will kill you! . I wanna see what happens next, this story is so cute!
seroun chapter 9 . 7/12/2009
This story is mesmerizing. I'm really enjoying it, and I hope to see more soon! Rainey gives me the chills... I'm still baffled at how he knows so much about Riza, and what his motives are.
Hinamori97 chapter 9 . 7/2/2009
col story wonder what will happen pleease update!1
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