Reviews for Pain in the Axel
PurpleArmadillo chapter 11 . 2/6/2014
Haha, that was extremely entertaining. Reading this fic several years later, but hey, better late than never, right? Very glad I found it! One of the things I liked the most about it was how well you balanced the humorous parts with details and descriptions. It really gave the story substance. I laughed my head off so many times while reading (I think Marluxia ended up being especially hilarious). And very nice job having all the smaller events link together (like the plastic honey bear). It was strangely satisfying seeing how the events unfolded and the consequences of everything.
AlithiaSigma chapter 11 . 7/6/2013
So Demyx finally did something. The Castle That Never Was is now soaked.
AlithiaSigma chapter 10 . 7/6/2013
I'm surprised it was Xigbar.
AlithiaSigma chapter 9 . 7/6/2013
It's Axel, isn't it?
AlithiaSigma chapter 7 . 7/6/2013
Yes, Demyx. Your evil sitar ate everyone. Now go to bed.
AlithiaSigma chapter 5 . 7/6/2013
Absolutely ridiculous, but surprisingly in character...
AlithiaSigma chapter 4 . 7/6/2013
*dies in a fit of giggles*
AlithiaSigma chapter 3 . 7/6/2013
Cherry scented hair gel?
AlithiaSigma chapter 2 . 7/6/2013
HAHAHAHA! Oh, Demyx is such an idiot.
AlithiaSigma chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
Yay! A fic with Axel/Lea and no slash! Finally. Favouriting immediately.
Arcana I chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
I found this in Deviant art and read it, I was LOL so hard, I find it down right hilarious, especially Demyx believe his sitar ate Axel.
Mad Random Writer chapter 11 . 3/22/2012
Everyone in the Organization had a little too much emotion, but your fic was extremely funny.

Thanks for the hilarious story.
Berander chapter 11 . 9/17/2011
Hahaha. Love pranks. All wonderfully in character. Now, if you could excuse me, I'm going to find that sequel.

LanadelBeyoncePuncher chapter 2 . 6/16/2011
LOL! LOVE this story, love Axel and his crazy ideas of doom! KH Forever! Nice work on th DA btw.
Verdancy of the Green chapter 7 . 6/14/2011
FMA shoutout!

This fanfic is really funny, and so far, it seems Roxas might end up as the victim instead of Axel...
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