|Reviews for Land of No Color|
| jj chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
OOMBALA Shut your mouth you flame people yet your stori k! a s s!
| XoreandoX chapter 26 . 7/21/2010
I must say the beginning was a little bit shaky, and I still have issues with you putting in your thoughts almost randomly within the story but to be entirely honest, I think you wrote a wonderful story and I'm happy I stayed with it from beginning to the end. Job well done, now to read the sequel P
| Oombala is really lazy chapter 2 . 7/15/2010
Okay, I don't know if this gets better later, but your writing is choppy, erratic, and too overdone. The words and phrases you're using don make sense in the context of the story. The words are creating am awkward flow and and it's so confusing. Also, the lack of panic is pretty unbelievable. If I were dumped somewhere with no knowledge of where I was with two strange creatures, I would probably freak out and run away. Understandable, they're all special and can handle more than the average human, but that's a little odd. The story is good and the premise is interesting, but I can't enjoy it/read it because I'm too irritated by your writing style.
Please take this as constructive criticism and not a flame. Sorry for any typos, I'm using my itouch.
| magic135 chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
pokemon/digimon crossover. i like it.
| Inarx chapter 25 . 2/27/2010
wow that was an anti-climax
the destined/trainers where so overpowered, they made Godal look like a noob...
| lunarwolf89 chapter 10 . 8/10/2008
I love your story keep it going.
| SeyWho chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
Omg. This story is soo awesome. I love how you combine digimon && pokemon.
their both really awesome.
| BrandonRC chapter 1 . 1/4/2008
| Girlprincess1 chapter 26 . 1/3/2008
Heyy You rock the house! This story is awsome! i was damn addicted to it! couldnt sleep cause i was anxiious to see wht happens! luv the Ash/Kari couple! there my fav! also lov Misty/T.K! PLEASE UPDATE A SEQUEAL! PLZ
| Joshua32 chapter 26 . 12/27/2007
Wow! The final chapter was super! I really loved this story! And thanks for going with AshKari and MistyTK. I really love those pairings! I look forwarf to the next story! Keep up the great work and I'll continue to review for you!
| Hazlov2004 chapter 26 . 12/26/2007
Im waiting for the next one good job
| Lord Pata chapter 26 . 12/26/2007
Interesting finale for this first part, Tentomon jealous was funny lol
Though call me crazy but I think that Gatomon is seeing Patamon on Pikachu, think about it, both rodents are so loyal to their partners and always want to please their friends and will do anything for them, also even though at first sight they don't seem to be much strong and powerful they hide a very amazing power within them, Patamon on his evolutions and Pikachu on his endurance and attacks, all fits perfectly plus Gatomon quickly got along with Pikachu just as she quickly got along with Patamon when she joined the team in 01 lol
Well that's how I did saw it and if you think about it, it does makes a bit of sense XD
But that's just me anyways
| Joshua32 chapter 25 . 12/20/2007
Wow! Awsome! I love it! Keep it up! I thought of s pairing for you. Please tell me what you think. MattMelody. Keep up the great work and I'll continue to review for you!
| PEJP Bengtzone chapter 24 . 12/16/2007
It's a very interresting chapter.
By the way can you go and read the review I made for you in Quest for the Keys II?
| Joshua32 chapter 24 . 12/13/2007
Wow! Awesome as always!