Reviews for If Only
Mrs. Jasper Winchester chapter 20 . 3/10/2008
Good story!
Sparrow Kess chapter 20 . 3/25/2007
omg i love this story
kirstiemuggins chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
dude! i thought i was reading something i wrote about myself. i swear. and by the way your stories are awesome!
Querida101 chapter 20 . 3/9/2007
Aww. I liked the whole story im sad is done.
kakashifan-0001 chapter 20 . 2/25/2007
Really great story!
not done baking chapter 1 . 2/19/2007
The charactors are a little OC... Edward wouldn't say 'score' and Bella speaks a little more maturally than you had her speaking... Keep AN's out of the story and watch your grammar. The writing itself is pretty good though!
vampire-lover-chica chapter 20 . 2/15/2007
spacemoose chapter 17 . 2/15/2007
i like it!
Delliz chapter 18 . 2/14/2007
This is really good, maybe Bella would use her powers a bit less though...?
vampire-lover-chica chapter 18 . 2/14/2007
Is he coming because she's prego? Please continue! I need a continuation soon! lol
vampire-lover-chica chapter 17 . 2/14/2007
OMG! BELLA'S PREGO! OMG! YAY! wait, u never said they did it... WHAT? im lost! any way, i helped find the car! lol, yay me! GO ON CHICA!
Haxelle chapter 17 . 2/14/2007
Reading-Justdoit chapter 17 . 2/14/2007
come on
Not saying chapter 3 . 2/13/2007
Ok, i really like your story and all, but it's a little OOC. For both of them. Any ways, i still like it. Now, with all your inside jokes, you have forced me to enter one (though my friend doesn't read these) Buttom darling!
vampire-lover-chica chapter 16 . 2/13/2007
EER! i dont like cliffys! good chappie though! continue!
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