Reviews for Phoenix Falling
writergirl2003 chapter 1 . 2/23/2007
Ooh I like! Great, great job!
WHITE ANGELS WINGS chapter 1 . 2/7/2007
HI,SQUISHY PENQUINS

POOR IS INSANE WHAT JACKSON DID TO HER STEAL HER LIFE A DETAIL PUT ALL ONE SHOT. I HOPE YOU HAVE MORE TO COME FOR THE RED EYE STORY.

WHITE ANGELS WINGS
Got Rice 15278 chapter 1 . 1/22/2007
That was an awesome chapter.

I'm very partial to anything psychological, it's my field of study. :)

Although, she shouldn't be able to see her father like that if she was in solitary confinement... and maybe you should mention that she was "off the haze of medication".

Poor Lisa-actually I was about to do a one shot like this lols, but i guess I was beaten to it...

-Out There

P.S. won't you take a look at my story "Perspectives."
Zzee chapter 1 . 1/22/2007
That was delicious, Squishy Penguin, just the right amount of morbidity and darkness. I especially like the way you gradually dropped your clues, very intriguing.
NicolinaN chapter 1 . 1/21/2007
Aw, sad! Nice imagery, I appreciated it, the rain, the newscast, the moon and the glowing walls. Good twist. But sad stuff.

:( Nic. :)
E.Woods chapter 1 . 1/21/2007
I liked it. It was very...creepy. In a good way.:)