Reviews for Beating Hyuuga Neji, youthful style
Guest chapter 2 . 3/29/2012
stwar chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
hahahahahaha Kakashi is going to scream like a girl an it is going to be so loud that all can here it i mane all
Jostanos chapter 2 . 7/4/2011
Can anyone in the stands say: "WTF!" as the potsticker bomb goes "BOOM!"? XD


Omake? :

"You dare disrespect my food. Well if you so desperate to be beaten, I'll gladly fulfill that fate of yours. Ninja Technique Pot sticker bomb!" yelled Naruto as he threw a plate of pot stickers at Neji. the pot sticker just fell to the ground nearby.

"Ha! Is that supposed to scare me?" sneered the Hyuuga.

By then it wss too late for Neji (The Hyuuga: O_O"WTF!") as the potsticker detonated with a bang.
halfdelita chapter 2 . 1/6/2009
creative. i cant imagine the orange kyuubi in green with his hands wrapped and -crosses himself- performing a lotus x.x
polli226 chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
This story stinks like shit i read the whole story and the first few sentences i find something wrong you should just stop writing now or be humiliated later.
Slytherson chapter 2 . 8/28/2008
please update soon!
Innortal chapter 2 . 2/24/2008
Odd twist, but well received.
Bobboky chapter 2 . 2/23/2008
Amei-chan chapter 2 . 2/23/2008
Yeah, I know I already read and told you stuff 'bout this chapter, but I figured that you deserved the review count. Heh, yeah...
gaul1 chapter 2 . 2/23/2008
O.O interesting
HCVquizibo chapter 1 . 10/23/2007
more more more dont stop its funny YOUTH POWER LOL
SuberXxXDuperXxXFunMachine chapter 1 . 9/29/2007
lol that waas funny quick do another chap it was awesome pllease do something more involving the green spandex cult like make green spandex fly from the sky and naruto, lee and gai sensei bow down to them dat would be funny
Slytherson chapter 1 . 2/25/2007
that was sad but end the middle and end it was amazingly funny! hahahahahahahahaha! I bet Kakashi is going to be shitting himself knowing that there is going to be another green beast of youth! Please update soon!
Amei-chan chapter 1 . 2/19/2007
Hilarious and awesome! But you already know that... And you're going to continue it, huzzah! Oh, and I just realized that it's related to 'Revenge of the green orange beast' heh...

Yeah, really cool. _
ShadowBack chapter 1 . 1/30/2007
How can we stop laughting after your awesome chapter, it's more than funny though Kakashi is more than... I love Naruto entrance, I wonder why the other Spandex guys haven't a better one though...

Keep up the excellent work !
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