|Reviews for Out of Reach|
| krissey cullen chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
i like it
| CreativeCookie chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
wow, this was so emtional i felt my heart sink as i read it0.0
i knew when i finished readng the Song of the Lioness Quartet that Jonathan probably still loved Allana but i never thought of it so deeply. amazing!
| Edwardjustproposed chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
LOVE IT!I AM GOING TO READ THE SEQUEL NOW!
| k chapter 1 . 9/20/2007
You're kind of redundant:
"...the best decision I’ve made as king, both for me and for my country.
But a tiny portion of my brain screams that it is not the best decision for me, yet it may be for my country. I had to sacrifice a bit of my welfare for that of my country, or a bit of my country for my own. As king, the country has to come first..."
How many times did you say "my country" or the word "country" in general?
Answer: A lot
| lenlen46 chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
I always imagined that's what each of them are really thinking and now that you've written it and I'm about to go on my A/J rants I can always look back at this to prevent me from annoying the heck out of my friends(one of which is an A/G fan, not that I have anything against A/G or J/T I just like A/J more!LOL!).Keep up the good work!
| Miss Apple Pie chapter 1 . 4/12/2007
Kinda sad! Love is interesting- huh?
| Tortall101 chapter 1 . 2/10/2007
Aww - beautifully written - sob!
| Verasque chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
That's so sad. Jon is such a deep person, you have an amazing knack for characterising him.
| Grace of Masbolle chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
You make Alanna seem so evil. Shame on you. He loved Thayet, and she no longer loved him. One the other hand it was good writng. I give it a B. good and bad. Why don't you do a stroy where Alanna marries Jon? It would be a good story.
| Mary Kay chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
Aw. that is so sad. sniff. i think i'm going to cry. sniff sniff. poor Jon. the poor guy, aw he's so cute! sniff.i love him so much! (tear slide down cheek) curse than wicked Alanna!
| tortallanrider chapter 1 . 1/21/2007
Aw...*tear* That's sad. I wish Jon had realized he loved her EARLIER...
| Eruanna Eire chapter 1 . 1/21/2007
Awh this was so sad, i understand why Alanna ended up with George in the books but i still prefer Jon...
| AlannaXJon4ever chapter 1 . 1/21/2007
*so sad...still i don't get why even though i read these stories i can't move on from A/J to a mild A/G