Reviews for Out of Reach
krissey cullen chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
i like it
CreativeCookie chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
wow, this was so emtional i felt my heart sink as i read it0.0

i knew when i finished readng the Song of the Lioness Quartet that Jonathan probably still loved Allana but i never thought of it so deeply. amazing!
Edwardjustproposed chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
k chapter 1 . 9/20/2007
You're kind of redundant:

"...the best decision I’ve made as king, both for me and for my country.

But a tiny portion of my brain screams that it is not the best decision for me, yet it may be for my country. I had to sacrifice a bit of my welfare for that of my country, or a bit of my country for my own. As king, the country has to come first..."

How many times did you say "my country" or the word "country" in general?

Answer: A lot
lenlen46 chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
I always imagined that's what each of them are really thinking and now that you've written it and I'm about to go on my A/J rants I can always look back at this to prevent me from annoying the heck out of my friends(one of which is an A/G fan, not that I have anything against A/G or J/T I just like A/J more!LOL!).Keep up the good work!
Miss Apple Pie chapter 1 . 4/12/2007
Kinda sad! Love is interesting- huh?
Tortall101 chapter 1 . 2/10/2007
Aww - beautifully written - sob!
Verasque chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
That's so sad. Jon is such a deep person, you have an amazing knack for characterising him.
Grace of Masbolle chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
You make Alanna seem so evil. Shame on you. He loved Thayet, and she no longer loved him. One the other hand it was good writng. I give it a B. good and bad. Why don't you do a stroy where Alanna marries Jon? It would be a good story.
Mary Kay chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
Aw. that is so sad. sniff. i think i'm going to cry. sniff sniff. poor Jon. the poor guy, aw he's so cute! sniff.i love him so much! (tear slide down cheek) curse than wicked Alanna!
tortallanrider chapter 1 . 1/21/2007
Aw...*tear* That's sad. I wish Jon had realized he loved her EARLIER...
Eruanna Eire chapter 1 . 1/21/2007
Awh this was so sad, i understand why Alanna ended up with George in the books but i still prefer Jon...
AlannaXJon4ever chapter 1 . 1/21/2007
*so sad...still i don't get why even though i read these stories i can't move on from A/J to a mild A/G