Reviews for my desire
bloodserpent1327 chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
that was a really good poem! it gave me a clear picture in my mind of what oro was thinking. maybe you could try writing one of what he thinks of anko?
BlazeDrgn chapter 1 . 1/30/2007
hm not bad, pretty cool. and its the truth... orochi is so going to backstab sasuke
Bumblebee91 chapter 1 . 1/25/2007

Just...Orochi style

D chyeah.
Videx chapter 1 . 1/25/2007
very interesting... I liked it
Kio-Kyon chapter 1 . 1/21/2007
HEY this story really tells how orochimaru really thinks, and it creeps me out with his crulty, and makes me feels soort of sorry for sasuke for being used. this peom is great, ur a great poet, i hope u continue more. freaky _