Great story! Read it ages ago and just fond it again, it was awesome. And thank you for the epilogue, great to have some sort of closure. Loved it!

I think its so stupid how for the whole story you've done it in Andy's point of view but for some of this you've done it in Oliver's. When using 1st person you don't randomly change who's telling the story because it confuses the reader. If you wanted to have shown everyone's feelings you should have done it in 3rd person which is a overview. Anyway I liked the story but near the end it just got rather silly. It's a shame.

"And then I'd put it on YouTube" yeah... They didn't have YouTube in the 90s.

OH MY GOD. I lost this story from HPFF and was completely devastated because I loved it so much. AND NOW I HAVE FOUND IT AGAIN. It's amazing and the way you wrapped it up was really great, a really nice way of dealing with an unfinished story. I don't know if you're still here, but know that this is one of the best fics I've ever read, it's hilarious and engaging and just the right distance from canon. Your characterisations are amazing and I am now totally in love with Oliver Wood and it's all your fault. I could go on and list everything I loved about this story, but it would pretty much include every aspect and go on for several pages. You are great, and I hope your book is going well :)

Thank you thank you thank you so much for posting the epilogues, both the ship and the one including all the friends. So many authors would have just tapped out and left it, s even though you couldn't finish I just hope you know how much I appreciate the closure. Favourite quote: the Weasleys exchanging quips about how much they love sunshine. Thank you for this story! :)

Jefferson returns. I love him. He's me.

Jefferson is a gift to this world. I hope my son grows up to be as respectful and persuasive as he. He and I have the same favorite color. I approve.

I am exactly like Alicia when drunk lmao

omfg

i laughed for a solid minute at tongue soup and then again at the hokey pokey lmao

People belittle girls but they all listen ahaha Andora calls mum jokes stupid and everyone stops the jokes even though they were trying to insult each other XD

Bloody hell you sure know how to write a Quidditch match, my heart was walloping into my ribs the whole time!

Oh dear. If there's two things I've learned from fanfiction the first is that when a guy you don't like kisses you, nothing good ever happens out of it.

The second is that girls generally kiss back, which is even worse. RIP Andora.

Oh I loved so many things in this story, I can't even put them all in this review! One word, Jefferson (what's your favourite colour?Sex. Enough said) I wish you the best of luck for your original fiction by the way (although I think I'm a bit late)

I have read so many books and short stories and (fan)fictions but I have NEVER been able to relate to a character as well as I have bern able to relate to Andy and I have never read anything without being annoyed by the protagonist at least once but that was really not the case with Andy. Your story had me giggling and smiling like a little girl the whole time some of the scenes were literally so powerful I had to stop for a minute just to take a deep breath because this story is literally just that good. I have been searchinh for a good Oliver Wood fanfiction for so long and coming across such a BRILLIANT fanfiction literally feels like a blessing. Thank you so so much for this and I wish you the best of luck in your next books and be sure you've just gained a fan who will be reading every chaoter of every book with enthusiasm

The idea that McGonagall punished her for quitting the team/being kicked off is odd. I find it rather silly actually.