|Reviews for Pokemon: The Final Journey|
| randanm person chapter 64 . 9/5/2013
whens the next chapter goanna be done?
| Guest chapter 64 . 8/4/2013
Why aren't you posting.
I love it.
| Zatch Bell-01 chapter 4 . 7/4/2013
| Zatch Bell-01 chapter 3 . 7/1/2013
Wait a minute. In the previous chapter, you said that they were in Celadon City but they're currently in Cerulean City. You must have made a mistake by accident and put Celadon instead.
| Zatch Bell-01 chapter 2 . 6/20/2013
Pokedex? She doesn't own a pokedex. That means she must've used Ash's pokedex. But, how did she get it out of his pockets if he had with him at all times?
| Guest chapter 65 . 6/19/2013
| SilverBear1992 chapter 11 . 6/5/2013
I like this story, but it truly does need some refining. I like how you gave a translation for Pokespeak, and how well you have expanded on the already developed characters. It has given me some minor inspirations for my story I am working on.
As for the things I did not like. The breaking of the fourth wall to explain yourself is sometimes distracting. Also the timeline is horribly askew, as an example: Ash wouldn't have Squirtle or Cyndaquil, Squirtle would be back with the Squirtle Squad and Ash evolved his Cyndaquil to Quilava long before now. And if you wanted Ash to win a few leagues a 2year gap is a short amount of time, considering the Indigo League meets every three years. Also names of Pokemon and Cities are spelled wrong, and for the love of Arceus Pokemon plural is Pokemon NOT Pokemons.
| Yashaskar chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Wow 65 chapters is u write u tell me how to write a story?
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
LOL & nice touch with the jigglypuff.
| Guest chapter 65 . 4/21/2013
This is by far the best pokemon fanfiction I have ever read, it actually pains me that you abandoned it. When will you finish it because I know that I and many more will ecstatic if you do.
| infernape2309 chapter 65 . 3/26/2013
comon it wasnt that bad just a tad slow but i really wanted to know what happens next
and mewto vs hsa was gud story line
| Guest chapter 43 . 3/6/2013
If dawn likes ash, than why is she relunctant to take the bushell of roses from ash? Do you even know what that means?
| Guest chapter 28 . 3/3/2013
Umm... groudon is a ground type...
Horrible grammer btw
| Pokemon Master chapter 65 . 2/22/2013
I liked it
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/4/2012
how old are you? you misspelled a lot of stuff in this fanfic. not saying i dont like the story, i love it. you just misspelled some stuff, thats all.