This has always been one of my all-time favorites ever and I always come back once in awhile to read it again. You have done a very good job.

The ending though. xD Love it!

You know this pairing really is disgusting when you consider Hinata's dad and Neji's dad where identical twins! Identical twins share DNA that means Hinata and Negji are more like siblings than cousins (something that most hina/negji shippers seem to forget)

LOVE THE LAST PARAGRAPH THE MOS! LOL :)

funny! i can almost imagine neji blue in the face waiting to have a chance with her!

Wowie! This was really something else :) the lime itself was only secondary, your amazing writing skills were the best part. Please write more!

Very good.

Ohhhhhhh I loved this *_* :D

Looooooove this. You've really made me think more about this pairing.

That was... actually sweet. Poor Neji but... It was sweet.

:] Iloved it...

awesome! i love neji/hinata, and this was actually a pretty good twist. nicely done!

hahaha! that was awesome, Go Hinata for beating the shit out of her fiance!

Ah... That was sick. In a good way if you weren't sure by the way. Real kick ass.

This was delish. I loved Neji slowly realizing how deeply he wants her.

poor neji...tat means hinata is still to be married to the man chosen by her father huh? *sigh* poor neji...but then again, at least he claimed to be hinata's first...i'd wish you'd do a sequel though...its really good...

great job!