Not bad, it almost makes me wish you'd written out the lemon, hee. You made it so sexy by NOT showing it, though, which takes skillful writing. Neji messing up and running away and taking forever was very realistic somehow...maybe because we've all done it at some point.

By the way, you're missing a "time" in the very last sentence.

VERY good. I liked this fic, and I like how you made Neji fall in love without his seeming pathetic. Good job! .

This was a great oneshot. Thank you so much for taking the time to write and post this. NejixHina is just the sweetest, most wrong pairing ever. I love it. :)

Ah,NejiXHinata fluff-smut. It does a body good.

I'm guessing Hinata still marries the asshole fiance. I was secretly hoping Neji would attack him, but then again Neji isn't brash and thinks before he acts.

I liked it. Way to get the readers attention with first sentence.

Lee talking to Neji seemed a little out of character.

i liked this :) some squick factors in here, but i'll ignore it on account of tihs is one of my favourite pairings, so :)

Oh wow. I loved this. I rarely read Neji/Hinata, not because I dislike it . . . just because I don't look for it? I don't know. Anyway, this is great. I read it earlier today but FF was being a bitch and saying that the fic didn't exist or had just been created . . . I don't know. It wouldn't let me see it. So, I review now. :D

That was way too long of a review. I'm sorry.

that was sexy! great story!

Oh god... Aubrey, this was... wonderful. Absoultely wonderful, oh so angsty - just the way I like it - and oh so very IC.

Neji is such a hard charcater to write - at least I think so - because he's so silent and serious most fo the time, and he never lets his shell crack or his control slip. I usually have problems with those sort of characters, but you did an amazing job.

I know I didn't decerve this, and all I can say is thank you.