Reviews for You Still Have All of Me
Jestine693 chapter 11 . 7/3/2016
The TARDIS doesn't translate Gallifreyan.
Jestine693 chapter 9 . 7/3/2016
too many plot holes and paradoxes
Badwolf chapter 26 . 5/24/2015
I loved this fic it was amazing!
Hairi Esh Mooncake chapter 7 . 12/2/2013
I think you're rushing things quite a bit... for example the Doctor's reaction to having a kid! To him, it would just mean way way too much to just react like that... and Martha was being unreasonable.. I mean, you can get jealous of an unknown woman, but of a child? It's one of those. "know your place"...well..
SillyJily chapter 7 . 6/2/2012
I'm really sorry and I honestly have no intention of being rude, but this is one of the worst stories I've ever read. Don't get me wrong, it's a great plot but it seems as if you haven't entirely thought it out, and the grammar is absolutely atrocious (really really bad) You literally just listed things off that Rose did in her day, starting nearly every one with "then". Get a good beta and a really good thesarus
WolfAngel75 chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
awesome ;)
Vi-Violence chapter 8 . 10/6/2010
Okay, this is sweet, but you need to work on it some, basically, plot good, expression... could use some work.
Rose Tyler. Doctor chapter 26 . 8/26/2010
that was such a good story! it's my fav. your so creative. I started to cry at the end! I wish it wasn't over!
LilacFaLaBraue chapter 26 . 9/24/2009
YesterdaysFuturesMemories chapter 26 . 9/4/2008
brilliant story ive been readin it 4 the lst 3 nights or summat nd wen i saw the chapter to badwolf bay i was prayin tht it was nt tht rose was stuck there agen i luv the endin tho lol
Samara Connor chapter 15 . 8/10/2008
OH...Yummy! Wonderful chapter! I love your story. Poor Poor Gwen!
Samara Connor chapter 11 . 8/10/2008
David Tenant the 10th doctor i am sure plays barty crouch Jr. it is quite funny. Barty crouch is quite evil. Love your story!1
Samara Connor chapter 6 . 8/2/2008
It is a wonderful story. wonderful name.
Hana no Sutoomu chapter 10 . 7/4/2008
i normay don't reviwe a story that has more chapters till the end but i can't help it because one this is an amazing story two i love the little girl and the mini adventures and the humer and fou, no, three i love the ending to this chapter it made me grin like a chesir cat. meow.
Jess chapter 4 . 7/3/2008
I'm sorry, but I seriously cannot read another word of this utter drivel without having to contemplate suicide. You have no idea how to construct anything other than a simple sentence and your syntax is repetative and boring. Get a dictionary and a thesaurus before attempting to write something, please; it'll spare us all a lot of pain and misery.

Oh, and learn something about Britain before you try and write a story set here. We don't have "malls" or "stores" and Rose's postcode is obviously incorrect - all postcodes in Great Britain end in letters, not numbers (for example, my postcode is ST5 7SR). We don't put our children in "cribs" or use "strollers" or anything that you've written. It's making me angry just looking at this story. Please, please, research a LOT about London or get a British beta reader because at the rate you're going, you'll have no integrity left amongst the DW fandom. The only people who like this story are equally retarded yanks such as you. Please just stop.
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