|Reviews for Darkfalling|
| Halcyon Impulsion chapter 5 . 1/27/2012
Oh, that is not good. Not good at all. Laura should not have let them in! Not that she could stop them :(
| Halcyon Impulsion chapter 4 . 1/16/2012
Poor Sam...he's not doing so hot. Like all the internal dialogue here.
| Halcyon Impulsion chapter 3 . 1/9/2012
You know I don't like gory and this was um, yeah. But I am really glad Dean appeared at the end :)
| Halcyon Impulsion chapter 2 . 12/30/2011
Well. That's not good. Hoping Laura gets there soon!
| Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
Interesting first chapter...loved this:
The "Sentry" wore a black robe, the sight of which made the elder hunter roll his eyes, Oh for the love of God! Get some originality here people!
| Raynidreams chapter 17 . 12/4/2007
“M been there done that... Thanks Sam...” Dean smirked raising his beer bottle to his little brother who blushed furiously. “My pleasure...” the younger hunter tossed back lightly making them all chuckle. - LOL, that made me laugh.
“When the sidhe world fell... I’m fairly certain even HE felt it... I think that’s why he saved Sam’s life, and would have saved Dean’s as well if Laura hadn’t got there before his spawn,” he grimaced. “The effort may have been wasted...” Anunnaki winced, “Feel the boy...” - very intriging ...
It’ll be fast...she’ll help him through it... he nodded setting down the bottle, flipping the safety off and pulling back the slide. - Oh no!
As you can see, I have finaly managed to finish this - my day got distracted by family visits and the making of Xmas mince pies. I am going to be very good, and read from The Devil inside, right up to your latest over the nest few days, so be prepared for some reviews. Great writing. It's not often that an AU world can be created with such clarity, or without sounding lame when using mythic figures. This series uses them with great wit and characterization. I am also not usually fond of original characters, but Laura is interwoven cleverly and with a tenderness to the cannon which doesn't jar. Okay, enough kissing ass. great job.
| Raynidreams chapter 12 . 12/4/2007
I love the little moments of comedy in these, Sam asking to be tied up, him naked and 'Dude, your creeping me out!' LOL, they do get into some situations.
| Raynidreams chapter 7 . 12/3/2007
LOL - had to go to bed before continuing on with this, but as I have to day off work, first thing in the morning seemed a good time to contiue: I am a Sam centric fic junki afterall. The imagry of Jeremy sitting beside her, slowly revealing his mind to Laura from being read is quite an interesting way to present the situation.
| Raynidreams chapter 2 . 12/3/2007
I think I am reading this series in reverse order as I have just finished Pitch Black (which I failed to review for, sorry - I was really interested to learn more about the series. Dean's pain in that was horrifying, but not over gory - I'll go back and place my review homage to a good fic when I get through this one).
In this, I am really wrapped up in what has happened to Sam. Brilliant story telling so far!
| Ace33 chapter 17 . 4/2/2007
Loved it! Completely loved it. The ending...whoa! What else can I say? You are amazing, and if you will allow it I would love to stroke your ego. I don't know how one person can be such a talented, and wonderful author! Great job, and I can't wait to read the others!
| brighette chapter 17 . 3/18/2007
Wow, that's a dark end! I guess Darkfalling...dark end...I don't know ;) So what's up next on your agenda? Some Dean whumpage?
| rozzy07 chapter 17 . 3/18/2007
So with a tremble on my lips I read this ending or sorts and cursed you out loud by the end! Why because you gave us our Sam & Dean & even Laura back. Out of the grey establishment of hospital, back to the true human fraility of healing and love and what comes with it all including guilt. Because our Sam is not dealing, is not healing fully, as alone he truly stands no matter how tight his brother holds on to him or how much Laura pours in some form of healing. Some wounds have gone too deep.
And the other coloured Igigi drawn to human sleeping thoughts, sucking out their needs - just what sort of supernatural vampire are we dealing with here? As for Cernunnos having that little aside with the king of the big I and leaving me so totally horrified, nay, well frigging speechless as Sam draws himself to a terrible conclusion - all I can say girl is please NO! I know you can conjure up the most horrific, the most inexplicable things at time, but please leave the word Hope on my lips. Hope is all those boys have left.
So as I despair, living in my heart with HOPE, all I can say is awesome story telling at its most fraught, most intense and simply the best. You know the word 'hiatus' will not be allowed because damn it girl I have to know where this goes next. Please... Roz
| CatBeist chapter 17 . 3/18/2007
The ending... again... so disturbing... in a good way, but you know that...
I know I promised a longer one (if I'm not mistaken) but not sure I will manage to say something new... and the spnfanily review wasn't all that bad in the end either...
But you know I loved this right... and you know I'm both happy and honored to get the chapters to go threw before it's posted... think I might be getting a tiny addiction... so hopefully you won't take too long to have your mind wrap itself around another story... What will I do now in between... read a book... nah that's not as fun :) I actually had a point with this... oh, no problem on the betaing and not needing the thanks on the AN either but... thanks...
And yeah... you have had your doing of the rewriting on this story but it did turn out great though... and we aim for nothing less than greatness right? Will not settle for OK... :)
Now... I'll see if I can get some pics into this laptop...
| gretchless chapter 17 . 3/18/2007
oh thanks for the cliffy !
hehe - i am getting a little confussed as i am reading two of your fanfics both have laura in them so u can see why i am getting a little confussed so i cant wait to finish your other stories so i can concentrate on just the one story, makes sense at all ?
i was gonna storp reading this one till i had read all the others but you kinda have me one edge and didnt think i could wait quite that long !
| carocali chapter 17 . 3/17/2007
Okay, it SO doesn't end there! NO way! When is the sequel and what is it called?
Such an interesting little universe you've created here. In my spare time (*cough, cough) I'd like to read the rest of your background stories. You have a lot going on, and you handle it pretty well. And the Big Bad just HAD to come out and play in the meantime.
But what about Sammy? Will he have a change of heart? Will someone intervene? Too much for one mind to take.