Reviews for Self Assembly
Guest chapter 1 . 4/12/2014
Never gets old. *dreamy sigh*
mom calling chapter 3 . 9/6/2009
When you wrote this, I knew nothing of ff7, fan fiction, or how much fun I would have in my future discovering your story. But that future is now, and I did indeed have fun with this story. Though at heart it is a serious piece of reconstruction of person. And that is the a reality I meet all the time, though not always does it come out right, as this does. I'm glad you let Cloud rebuild so well. Very glad. thx mc
Creative Spark chapter 3 . 7/17/2008
I enjoyed it. Especially the lil' Cloud, Denz bonding moments. Awesome work.

Squeeze-the-Fish chapter 3 . 5/1/2008
This was beautiful. Marlene was hilarious. Cloud is so honest and…and I don’t know, innocent? in this. Your story really touches my heart. I know that sounds corny, but I’ve read so many stories where Cloud is a jerk, or emo, or just a love sick puppy…this is refreshing. Again, great job.
Squeeze-the-Fish chapter 2 . 5/1/2008
Beautiful chapter. I loved Cloud’s interactions with Denzel, they were heartwarming. You write Denzel well too, I liked him asking Cloud if he was going to marry Tifa. The scene where Tifa and Cloud are on the couch was touching as well. You have a way with these two and I like it a lot. Good job again.
Squeeze-the-Fish chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
This was a good first chapter and a nice setup for the rest of the story. I noticed a few spelling errors, but nothing too distracting. I really enjoy the way you write Cloud, I think you have a knack for him. It's funny when he discovers that Vincent might have a sense of humor. Good job.
Neophyte Ronin chapter 3 . 10/1/2007

Honestly, the present tense sort of choked my initial regard for the fic and I nearly quit reading; I tend to frown upon a constant present tense as it's not quite something I'm used to reading. Thank God it stayed that way and didn't flip around.

The amount of care taken to properly describe all the speaking characters, however, sort of makes for another weakness in the manuscript. Everyone under the age of twenty-five is well-represented, and even hallucinations of Sephiroth stayed pretty true. Then there were characters like Barret and Cid involved; I don't think they were described in enough detail for what they're worth.

Even so, I'm delighted by the ending. It seems that what Cloud could use is a true-to-form family.

The marvel is that it's written pretty well, with a bare-minimum of mistakes. It certainly deserves its nomination for Best Drama at Genesis Awards.
LoveYourLife77 chapter 3 . 9/11/2007
omg plz update lyk 4 when he asks her just asking lol loved it short, sweet, and cute
Alma chapter 3 . 9/9/2007
Wow, that was really good. I loved Cloud's interaction with Marlene in the last chapter in particular. Very cute. The whole fic is very well written and flows beautifully. Great work!
Ginger Ninja chapter 3 . 8/22/2007
Absolutely loved this. I loved how you wrote all the characters and how you blended Cloud's flashbacks with the present.

ChieriAn9eL chapter 3 . 7/31/2007
This was a simple but cute story... and realistic too. Hehe... Poor Cloud, those kids will be the death of him. I'm tempted to read your other stories but I must get back to work. *sigh*
ChieriAn9eL chapter 1 . 7/31/2007
I really love the details and emotions you put into this. And the humor too... the comment Vincent made about the coffin was too funny. Good job!
harrypotterperson chapter 3 . 7/18/2007
i think its really sad that you dont have more reviews, because you are easily one of the best ff7 authors here, and ive looked at a lot of stories. If there is anything weird about your stories, I feel like you keep changing tenses and it does get a bit confusing, but i guess it just takes a while to get used to. Anyway, good job!
Texas Chigger chapter 3 . 4/11/2007
I recall reading this one before, in my days as a lurker in the realm of FFVII. Isn't that horrible? I also remember that I liked it back then, too. ;)

This really is a great story. Everyone is so true to their characters; and the kids are so precocious (that is how you spell that isn't it?); and Cloud's step by step extraction of all his ghosts is perfect. It makes sense that he wouldn't be able to make them all go at once, and to start with the bad and slowly work your way toward Zack is no doubt the single best way to go about it. After all, who wants to get rid of their friends before their enemies? ;)

Again, your talent as an author is remarkable. Keep up the awsome work. :)
ishmarnara chapter 3 . 3/8/2007
Very nice, I enjoyed the story.
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