Reviews for Revelation
sell chapter 17 . 10/18/2011
Translate portuguese,ok?

Como já explicado numa leitura anterior,estou lendo suas histórias com anos de atraso. Antes tarde do que nunca. Gostei muito desta fic, um olhar na vida de um jovem e descontente Bobby Goren...No show, ele assiste à sua mãe de modo tão passivo,nunca é duro com ela, mesmo quando ela o magoa ao preferir Frank( Eu fico indignada quando ela faz isso)e aqui,na fic, como um adolescente, ele é muito ê retratou com fidelidade as atitudes de um garoto de quinze anos cujo lar é um também teve momentos engraçados, como quando Bobby esqueceu de levar suas cuecas.É uma pena que você não tenha explorado a presença do Sr. Reilly, uma figura masculina, e tenha deixado tudo nas mãos só de mulheres. Um jovem precisa sim da influência masculina. Li alguns comentários negativos a respeito do serviço social. É verdade que é falho e burocrático, mas já salvou muitas pessoas, principalmente crianças, em situação de risco. É um trabalho digno e valoroso onde em sua maioria é composto de pessoas que estão tentando amenizar o sofrimento de outros, como sua personagem acha que pode cuidar de si mesmo;NÃO PODE! Só o fato de estar agressivo, desrespeitoso com figuras de autoridade,boca cheia de palavrões e tão cedo envolvido com fumo( ARGH)mostra sérios erros de critérios. Essas atitudes são repreensíveis num adulto , quanto mais num menino, mas que infelizmente muita gente acha que é certo; revoltar-se contra sim de autoridade e disciplina, tanto que a falta dela transforma a vida não para a melhor, mas para a pior.Não vê o exemplo na vida de Bobby? O problema não é autoridade, mas a falta ou o excesso bem que foi só uma fase ( embora Bobby tenha ido pra terapia na temporada 10 )e ele tenha se tornado o homem que amamos hoje.

Como disse, estou lendo suas fics muito atrasado e noto que faz um certo tempo que você não favor, continue, você escreve muito bem e estou à espera de mais leitura. beijos
The Confused One chapter 17 . 11/13/2007
YAY :) A happy ending. I'm glad he got to go home. I really, really am. Though I still don't like Denise. A bunch of nosy people... Sorry. I'm really not much a fan of government. LOL Politics and the role of government is definitely something that can get me started... I did like how you brought it back to the present. :) The B/A moment was nice. :) Interesting that she never thought that those irritating people had been involved in his life. LOL Great work. :)
bammi1 chapter 17 . 10/12/2007
This was an excellent story and I enjoyed it very much. I join you in loving to write about Bobby's childhood. Looking forward to your next story!
DejaBlue1972 chapter 17 . 10/8/2007
What a wonderful story! Thanks for giving us a peek into Bobby's life. Can't wait for the next story. :o)
MAB1958 chapter 17 . 10/8/2007
The ending along with the rest of this story was fantastic, good job throughout. Looking forward to Chaos.
charlieboy chapter 17 . 10/7/2007
Awh...Excellent chapter! Loved how you ended the story with Denise touching the outskirts of his life! Yes, I can definitely tell that you loved writing about him as a teenager. You did an awesome job!
Metisse chapter 17 . 10/7/2007
Marvelous! Nice way to end it. Can't wait for the rest. You do write young Bobby very well. I've enjoyed this series a lot. :)
Ruby Rosetta Red chapter 17 . 10/7/2007
I've really enjoyed this glimpse into Bobby's past and how he coped with his mom's illness, his family, real and 'adopted' and trying to be fifteen, it was wonderful and has kept me enthralled from the first chapter.

And 'John'...would that be John Eames by any chance? if so, nice twist and i thought it was so cool the way you rounded the story off, with Denise and Bobby seeing each other again prior to her retirement, those loose ends were tied up very neatly.

Looking forward to 'Chaos' :)
deliriousdancer chapter 17 . 10/6/2007
I love that you wrapped up this segment with Bobby being a detective when he sees Denise. Such a wonderful success story for both of them. I am so looking forward to Chaos. This was wonderful.
DejaBlue1972 chapter 16 . 9/23/2007
Excellent chapter! I like the exchange between Bobby and Andy. LOL They remind me of my older cousins. Keep up the great work and update soon. :o)
Ruby Rosetta Red chapter 16 . 9/23/2007
Great chapter and wonderful writing. The Bobby Goren that we know now could be heard in every single word. I liked how he opened up to Cathy and as always, his camaraderie with Andy, the brother he should have had.

As always, i look forward to your next update :)
charlieboy chapter 16 . 9/23/2007
Aw, is that Bobby's first kiss too? Well, I can definitely see alot of the dad in Frank (and hopefully, not Bobby!). Hm, will the basketball incident come back to haunt him? Andy and Bobby sure behave a lot like brothers. Love their interaction! Great chapter! Looking forward to more!
deliriousdancer chapter 16 . 9/23/2007
I feel so sorry for Bobby. He must get really tired trying to maintain that "who gives a damn attitude" all day long. It certainly goes against his natural gentle heart. Andy might need a little more education if he thinks a kiss is permission for a grope. Wouldn't want the poor boy to grow up believing dinner equals sheet time. Oh well, what can you do with a teenager? I hope Bobby does not get sent away to a stranger's home on Tuesday. I am anxious about his court date.
Metisse chapter 16 . 9/23/2007
Great chapter! Love the banter between Bobby and Andy. Typical teenage boy stuff. LOL Did you get to touch a boob? LOL

Guess one thing most authors of Bobby as a child seem to agree on is that his dad is a first rate A-hole. Even with all that I'm rooting for him to be Bobby's actual dad and not Brady.

Can't wait for more. I love young Bobby stories. :-)
DejaBlue1972 chapter 15 . 9/17/2007
Now that I've caught up on all my reading, I've got to say this is a great chapter. I actually enjoyed the tension between Bobby and his dad. Can't wait for the next update. :o)
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