Reviews for Attention, WalMart Shoppers
Lilith Filth chapter 1 . 1/25/2007
Funny as Hell!

How do you come up with this stuff?

I could just imagine the confusion on his face

Well done.
Mrs-Edward-Cullen chapter 1 . 1/25/2007
hahahahahahaaha! was laughin out loud for like 10 mins! great writing as always! ah poor edward :-P
Streaming Radiant Fire chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
wow...edward and condoms...interesting...
vicki chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
this was so funny. I really enjoyed it. you should continue, or at least write another. good job.

-vicki
Addie W chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
Yes, I've been to Wal-Mart at two A.M. It can either be scary or dead, depending on the day.

And this is an odd idea... I'm not sure if I should laugh or mark you off as insane. :P

But update again soon, please, so I can make up my mind. ;)

Addie
SayWhatttt chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
Ha! Loved that! So freakin' hilarious. And the VMT rox. Update!
LouisvilleKiss chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
hilarious! r u continueing it? it would b a great story!
0zephyr0 chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
heh heh heh very amusing. I was laughing the whole time XD Please continue this! It's the best mix of suggestiveness and comedy I've ever seen. Hilarious ;D
My-Only-Love chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
LOL! That was hilarous! Poor Edward..
politik780 chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
This is really good, I wanna know what happens...and by the way, did you stand in front of the condoms and write down all the names, or did you just memorize them? I'm just kidding. Update soon!
Jasmine444 chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
haha..so funny!
Warui-Usagi chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
God, that was funny! Haha. Poor Edward, he was so uncomfortable. :) That was great!
Craziness-n-love chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
LMAO. HAHAHAA...

OMG, Edward buying CONDOMS? I was imagaining it, and...

I was laughing SO HARD...

This is great, silly bella, I love it! Very, very funny.
dark fairy79 chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
thats great,Rattlesnake venom. the best line, hope you make more
Emmohdee chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
Late night shopping. I've been there.

Course, my situation was a little different. Heehee, we were on a TP-ing mission. But still.
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