Reviews for Attention, WalMart Shoppers
TotalEclipseOfTheHeart2114 chapter 1 . 1/25/2007
I already freakin' love this story! Wearing pajamas outside is perfectly least for me it is...haha

Rattlesnake would've thought he was crazy...but then again, he is really hot so I probably wouldn't care and I would still hit on him lol _

I can't wait until the next chapter!
Senorita Carbon chapter 1 . 1/25/2007
XDD I love it, and I could see that happeng to Edward just cause he's Edward. KEEP WRITING!

HikariTwilight chapter 1 . 1/25/2007
*Dies laughing* Edward with a box of condoms...
Super SaDist chapter 1 . 1/25/2007
omg that was so funny! me and my friend laughed for 18 minutes straight, then cracked up again!

PotatoDollop chapter 1 . 1/25/2007
EXTREMELY FUNNY! r you going to write more or is this just a oneshot? i hope you continue!
Chrissienuil chapter 1 . 1/25/2007
haha ah por edward but funny
Lilith Filth chapter 1 . 1/25/2007
Funny as Hell!

How do you come up with this stuff?

I could just imagine the confusion on his face

Well done.
laramara89 chapter 1 . 1/25/2007
hahahahahahaaha! was laughin out loud for like 10 mins! great writing as always! ah poor edward :-P
Streaming Radiant Fire chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
wow...edward and condoms...interesting...
vicki chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
this was so funny. I really enjoyed it. you should continue, or at least write another. good job.

Addie W chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
Yes, I've been to Wal-Mart at two A.M. It can either be scary or dead, depending on the day.

And this is an odd idea... I'm not sure if I should laugh or mark you off as insane. :P

But update again soon, please, so I can make up my mind. ;)

SayWhatttt chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
Ha! Loved that! So freakin' hilarious. And the VMT rox. Update!
LouisvilleKiss chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
hilarious! r u continueing it? it would b a great story!
0zephyr0 chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
heh heh heh very amusing. I was laughing the whole time XD Please continue this! It's the best mix of suggestiveness and comedy I've ever seen. Hilarious ;D
My-Only-Love chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
LOL! That was hilarous! Poor Edward..
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