Reviews for Attention, WalMart Shoppers
LouisvilleKiss chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
hilarious! r u continueing it? it would b a great story!
0zephyr0 chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
heh heh heh very amusing. I was laughing the whole time XD Please continue this! It's the best mix of suggestiveness and comedy I've ever seen. Hilarious ;D
My-Only-Love chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
LOL! That was hilarous! Poor Edward..
politik780 chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
This is really good, I wanna know what happens...and by the way, did you stand in front of the condoms and write down all the names, or did you just memorize them? I'm just kidding. Update soon!
Jasmine444 chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
haha..so funny!
Warui-Usagi chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
God, that was funny! Haha. Poor Edward, he was so uncomfortable. :) That was great!
Craziness-n-love chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
LMAO. HAHAHAA...

OMG, Edward buying CONDOMS? I was imagaining it, and...

I was laughing SO HARD...

This is great, silly bella, I love it! Very, very funny.
dark fairy79 chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
thats great,Rattlesnake venom. the best line, hope you make more
Emmohdee chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
Late night shopping. I've been there.

Course, my situation was a little different. Heehee, we were on a TP-ing mission. But still.
BillKaulitz4ever chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
HAHAHAHA!That was very interesting!Please write more.I want to see what he does!
Raen13 chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
HAHA thats hilarious! please do more ! Update soon i love it!
VampireApple chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
Ah, just looking at the title I could tell this would be good. Then the bit about the PJ’s, I love this! Ah, poor Edward. This is really funny.
oldschoolnames chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
Uhm, can I just say how much I love you?

I have read all of your Twilight-related stories, and I have to say they are all amazing. This one made me laugh so hard. Heehee, that's such a human thing to do, shopping for condoms. :D "Karyn, if I milked a rattlesnake into this condom, would it contain the venom safely?" AHAHAHAHAHAH!
IHeartTwilightLemons chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
That was awesome! There's just a little thing that doesn't make sense though. In the last paragraph it says "As the they slipped into an argument..." Maybe I just don't get it? Either way I just wanted to let you know. Can't wait for the next chapter!

-SaM
Samantha Cartier chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
Lmao! That was hilarious! Is this a one shot or are you writing a short story?
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