Reviews for Attention, WalMart Shoppers
Ellachanted chapter 5 . 6/15/2012
I love this story. I have to reread it every so often. LOL!

Poor Edward. :)
jojo.102 chapter 5 . 6/13/2012
SOOO HILARIOUS!

great job. :D
cinewardy chapter 5 . 6/12/2012
LOOLLLL! This was hilarious! Love it!
Tsuruga-Ryuuki chapter 5 . 4/30/2012
LOL!
lol chapter 5 . 4/22/2012
THIS WAS SOOO FUNNY! LOVED IT
stillsingininrain chapter 5 . 3/13/2012
This story is flippin' hilarious!
Iggy Valentine chapter 5 . 3/10/2012
I'd have so read all the twilight books if stuff like this were to happen often.
ImmortalWar chapter 5 . 2/19/2012
laughed...so...hard...hahahahaha
Liz Ben chapter 5 . 1/28/2012
hilarious! thanks for the laugh :)
Your Worst Nightmare chapter 3 . 1/23/2012
KitKats are red! How could you forget that, what a shame too! And what are Bella and the Cullen "matriarchs" doing, and what if Charlie just happened to come upon them. Oh, the embarrassment, I'd hate to be ol' Eddie, the hundred plus year old virgin...
I-Love-PAD.FOOT-Way-MORE chapter 5 . 1/4/2012
FUNNY I LOVE IT!
Christina Fey chapter 3 . 11/26/2011
ROFLMAO! Love it!

~Jess
RenaDoll chapter 5 . 10/26/2011
What an original idea and so so funny! LOVED IT!
Luuh2311 chapter 5 . 10/22/2011
OMG! I'm still laughing. This is too funny. My stomach hurts from laughing so much.

You know what I imagined by the end? What if Edward met Charlie in the same aisle, buying what he was searching for.

This story was awesome! Great job!
CyraBear chapter 5 . 10/18/2011
My favorite line: "she nailed me as the odd man out." Giggle-snort.

You should do a companion piece about why Rose hates Wal-Mart. Good story.
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