Reviews for Attention, WalMart Shoppers
stillsingininrain chapter 5 . 3/13/2012
This story is flippin' hilarious!
Iggy Valentine chapter 5 . 3/10/2012
I'd have so read all the twilight books if stuff like this were to happen often.
ImmortalWar chapter 5 . 2/19/2012
Liz Ben chapter 5 . 1/28/2012
hilarious! thanks for the laugh :)
Your Worst Nightmare chapter 3 . 1/23/2012
KitKats are red! How could you forget that, what a shame too! And what are Bella and the Cullen "matriarchs" doing, and what if Charlie just happened to come upon them. Oh, the embarrassment, I'd hate to be ol' Eddie, the hundred plus year old virgin...
I-Love-PAD.FOOT-Way-MORE chapter 5 . 1/4/2012
Christina Fey chapter 3 . 11/26/2011
ROFLMAO! Love it!

RenaDoll chapter 5 . 10/26/2011
What an original idea and so so funny! LOVED IT!
Luuh2311 chapter 5 . 10/22/2011
OMG! I'm still laughing. This is too funny. My stomach hurts from laughing so much.

You know what I imagined by the end? What if Edward met Charlie in the same aisle, buying what he was searching for.

This story was awesome! Great job!
CyraBear chapter 5 . 10/18/2011
My favorite line: "she nailed me as the odd man out." Giggle-snort.

You should do a companion piece about why Rose hates Wal-Mart. Good story.
CyraBear chapter 4 . 10/18/2011
I just figured out that Karyn is under the impression that they can't hear her. Makes much more sense now.
CyraBear chapter 3 . 10/18/2011
How the hell did she fit all that into one cart? :)
CyraBear chapter 2 . 10/18/2011
I so adore Emmett. If you need comic relief, he's always a good choice.
CyraBear chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
This is awesome so far. I wanted to make sure you'd seen this website: www . peopleofwalmart
sam4691 chapter 5 . 10/12/2011
very funny, thnx
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