Reviews for Attention, WalMart Shoppers
I-Love-PAD.FOOT-Way-MORE chapter 5 . 1/4/2012
FUNNY I LOVE IT!
Christina Fey chapter 3 . 11/26/2011
ROFLMAO! Love it!

~Jess
RenaDoll chapter 5 . 10/26/2011
What an original idea and so so funny! LOVED IT!
Luuh2311 chapter 5 . 10/22/2011
OMG! I'm still laughing. This is too funny. My stomach hurts from laughing so much.

You know what I imagined by the end? What if Edward met Charlie in the same aisle, buying what he was searching for.

This story was awesome! Great job!
CyraBear chapter 5 . 10/18/2011
My favorite line: "she nailed me as the odd man out." Giggle-snort.

You should do a companion piece about why Rose hates Wal-Mart. Good story.
CyraBear chapter 4 . 10/18/2011
I just figured out that Karyn is under the impression that they can't hear her. Makes much more sense now.
CyraBear chapter 3 . 10/18/2011
How the hell did she fit all that into one cart? :)
CyraBear chapter 2 . 10/18/2011
I so adore Emmett. If you need comic relief, he's always a good choice.
CyraBear chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
This is awesome so far. I wanted to make sure you'd seen this website: www . peopleofwalmart
sam4691 chapter 5 . 10/12/2011
very funny, thnx
pgrabinEdward chapter 5 . 10/11/2011
That was one of the funniest things I have ever read- just too perfect! :)
sholtsclaw698 chapter 5 . 9/26/2011
that story was sooo funny!
fanofstories chapter 5 . 9/25/2011
LOL. Awesome... This shopping adventure was funny.
RunsfromReality chapter 5 . 8/29/2011
Too funny - I had this recommended to me about a year ago, but I've been a little behind. Still, it was a wonderful, humorous break in my workday and I really appreciated it!
Peace.Lovee.Edward chapter 5 . 8/22/2011
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA THIS WAS PRICELESS! INCREDIBLE!
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