Reviews for Battle of the Verses
LoveGlutton chapter 1 . 7/21/2014
Epic Haiku battle!
Percabethgirl2645 chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
Very creative. Loved it
Guest chapter 1 . 11/26/2013
Lol! The horror of thinking in haiku! I stink at writing it!

"Wildly beating heart,

Breathing strange, irregular.

I see what you feel."

Wildly is 3216 that's the only mess up I could find, so wonderful! Perhaps change wildly to wild
dreamkj chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
hahahhaaaa this story was so cute!
Fang chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
Ah Ha epic story!
jessica-semnadaprafaze123 chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
lol, i loved it, very very cute.
laelruin chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
Very interesting. I don't know how to think or speak in haiku, but with a little time and practice, perhaps I can master this.

Thanks so much for the interesting story. I really enjoyed it and I hope to see more of the fun but serious Sokka and Toph talking to each other.

Thanks again,

Ruin
Toph Rules58 chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
Awesome
tomboy 26 chapter 1 . 10/25/2010
Lmao .. I LOVED it. Confessions in haiku .. how poetic _
ziashapeshifter101 chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
very good! i've never seen this done before! i like it!
kalicious chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
This is awesome!
victorionious chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
Yeah, that sounds awful!

Oh, no. No! Not me as well!

Haikus are so mean. :(

This story is good

By good I mean astounding!

Funny and quite cute!

Tokka is the best!

Better than even Kataang!

No... wait... Kataang rules.

That was very hard!

Haikus are not as easy

As many would think!

You did a great job

Hope my review is enjoyed

Invaderk, you rock!

The last is pronounced

Inva-derk, not the right way

Right, Invader Kay?
tsujigiri chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
A work of sheer genius - I loved the Sokka section in Ba Sing Se too. My response was to try to speak to all my shop's customers in haiku...

But you said 'After writing this, I began thinking in Haiku. The horror!' I think you mean;

'After writing this

I thought mostly in haiku

The horror, the pain'

Else, to quote the show 'thats one too many syllables there bub' [high speed eviction...]
upsidedownboat chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
Hahaa, this was brilliant! I absolutely loved it. :) Although, i would've like to have kept reading it, but oh well. I thoroughly enjoyed this! :D And indeed, i do really like Toph. XD xox

xx Boat xx
TezTra chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
"Your story so cute

I admire the writing

Haikus are your flair"

Sucks I know, but i just wanted to come up with an original review :)... it is original right? anyways, wonderful writing and the story was so adorable, with the whole simple contest turned confession-fest :) beautiful! keep up the great work!

Happy Days

Pinkflower101
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