Reviews for Flu Bugs and Vegetable Soup
NeverGonnaDie chapter 1 . 3/9/2014
OMG you're killing me with cuteness! Adorable! I️3 it!
kickassdani chapter 1 . 1/10/2014
SOOOO CUTE! You have to continue this, it's too good to leave as a one-shot. Maybe Shanks will adopt Ace and Luffy and they'll set out to se on Shank's ship!
bloodytears87 chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
this was cute 3 but I was curious. since luffy is 7 in this, is ace 10 or is he older?
Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 12/24/2013
This is so Sweet and Adorable warming...! :)

Shanks act like Loving Father...!

And Ace really Loving Brother...!

And when Shanks sick, both Luffy and Ace visited him...!


This is sooo Nice...!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
This is sooo cute!
TheRoseThatKnowsPain chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
D'awwwwww! So cute! I love the last line so much! Kyaaaa! *dies from the cuteness of it all*
Pokabu chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
So cute and sweet! Ace being the worried older brother was adorable, and Shanks as the father figure was great as well!
Anjelle chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
That was such an adorable story! I have a weak spot for cute stories like this XD
smoll Gcat chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
that was cute and fluffy.
Lyneel chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
very sweet, with a great happy ending (well, almost perfectly "happy" ;) ) :D
azab chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
i loved it a lot
LittleLunaChan chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
Thank you for putting Shanks in the story, I love fanfictions about Luffy, Ace and Shanks 3 It's such a cute story, it's gonna be one of my favo's
CharmingKarma chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
Awwww *coos* Adorable! Amazing job, I loves it *cheers* Their interaction is just so genuine here _
ArAnCaR No. 6 chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
Adorable XD Lol, that's true, both Luffy and Ace could pass off as his kids XD
AngelRin89 chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
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