|Reviews for Last Stand|
| SushiJaguar chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
It's pretty good for a first fic. It's also about on of my favourite games, so bonus points! However, there were a few grammatical errors, but they didn't detract from the story all that much.
I liked how you expanded on the original game and added Resistances from the other areas of New York, and slotting in the Japanese was a nice surprise too. Looking forward to more!
| Comrad Zinchkey chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
I like it good job.
| nozdormu chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
It is very good however more chapters would be nice
| Terry suiri chapter 1 . 2/8/2008
Wow nice story. Thats all i can say. so far
| Evil Riggs chapter 1 . 4/19/2007
"It passed the first test . . . I didn't go blind."
| T H E O V E R L O R D chapter 1 . 2/25/2007
Definatly dose show promise and to Jin Won not every single Russian sais comrade you idiot. But anywho good story but keep practicing.
| Jin Won chapter 1 . 1/28/2007
I'll try to keep it short and sweet, your story is okay. No real description, if I was not to know who Chris Stone was and how he looked I would be reading about faceless ghouls and your scenery description is not good either. I give it a 4/10.
Also: I doubt a Russian would say "sir" more likely he would say comrade.
| GunGreg89 chapter 1 . 1/26/2007
This story shows some promise. Hopefully, it'll get better as the story continues.