Reviews for A Simple Request |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This fic needs more reviews and love! It's one of the most well written Toph/Zuko fic that I've read ️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I quite liked this. I liked this a lot. Toph and Zuko, alongside Iroh, are my favorite characters from the series and I really ship them together (Toph and Zuko, not Iroh and... well either of them, that'd be weird). I appreciate that it's a one-off too, a nearly 16k words one-off. I tend to get caught up in stories like this, and I would get caught in this one if you wrote more, and I already have tons on my alert bar. There's a certainly quality to neatly and well-contained stories that I appreciate as well and you really have that here. Nice job, going on my favorites. -Storyman |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for this beautiful fic. Really nice read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just want to say, I've read this fic at least half a dozen times because it's amazingly well written 3 this is spot on. Very true to character. I'm always so happy to keep coming back to this fic Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() For someone (you) who's not a huge fan of Toko, you wrote probably the best Toko fanfic of all time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting. XD Both of them are emotionally damaged and horrible at recognizing the actions that need to be taken in regards to those feelings. So, this all seems very plausible. I enjoyed it. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() the point is 100 out of 100! one of the best toko fanfic. complex with beatiful plot, not rush yet enjoyable, wonderful oneshot. thanks for the the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I honestly don't know why this doesn't have so Mich more reviews. It is such an incredible characters exploration that leave you with a great understanding of the characters. Seriously, something's wrong with some fandoms. I hope you make another one on the same couple but really , I'd read anything you write after this. |
![]() ![]() This was the best Zuko/Toph Fanfiction I've read, and I've read quite a few. I thought it was absolutely ingenious. The characters stayed in character, the story line was amazing, and I loved how you tired it all up in the end. It was written like a real book, and not chopped up into piece meal to the point where it's no fun to read. You have an amazing gift and a real eye for detail. I truly loved your story, and even though I rarely review Fanfiction, I just had to tell you how amazing your story was and how talented you are. I will definitely be reading this again, probably after reading a very poorly written Fanfiction in the near future. Thank you so much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes, yes, yes! Smack-down gorgeous - can't even begin to describe how fed-up I am with immature romance (though that's kind of my own fault for seeking out 'Avatar' romance-fanfiction) and...teens who can barely slap a sentence together. You're a good writer, and it shows. Thanks for the time you put into this one, it was... it was a good concept, and it shows. 'Very' British - so much Repression and Duty and mmmmmmmmmh. Loved it. Thanks again! -Mai |
![]() ![]() make a sequel o.o |
![]() ![]() ![]() There is a future possibility that Toko could happen. This fanfic is a good example for it. Even though you're not fond of this pair you manage to write this story nicely and I really enjoyed it. Their truce thing is adorable, by the way. ;) |
![]() ![]() Loved this great job :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh, I remember reading this fic years and years ago, before S3 had aired, and loved it. Back again for a reread, and still loving it- especially regarding characterization and slow development of their relationship. |