Reviews for Beginner's Luck
Guest chapter 1 . 2/17/2014
hm... not bad but ryoma doesn't act like 's more you know suddaburen(i know i spelled this wrong so plz sound it out.)And most of the time momo is the more pervented person.

anyway good luck, and keep up the great work
xxx-akiho-xxx chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
Oh I really liked this! And it was really well written! Thanks for writing this.
sairakanzaki chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
this story is kinda funny and i really like it! _ specially the way you describe momo i like it!
deathbyinsomnia chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
haha XD

continue O.O
aoiyumekou48 chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
And now you got me all worked up just thinking of what will Momo look like if his hair's down. Hmm, I bet he would be CUTER :P

Seriously, someone should write more MomoRyo fics. They're really cute together than MomoKaidoh (sorry for MomoKaidoh fans out there).
Melmel Phase chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
That was great! But i really think a sequal would be good...please?
Free of Mundane Thoughts chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
Aw! *squeals* So adorably cute! I can't believe it. It's just... so... perfect! Hehe, this pairing is written far to little, in my opinion. They're just so cute, how could you NOT write about them? Though I suppose you'd need an idea before you started, but surely with such a wonderful pairing there would be plenty of people writing it, more than I found on ffn, at least. It's actually a little disappointing to see how few good MomoRyo fics there are here... *sigh*

Thank you for contributing to the GOOD MomoRyo fics on ffn!
Azamiko chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
XD
Lovely Spell chapter 1 . 4/10/2008
awesome. . hehehe practice does make perfect ;].

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thanks for sharing!
Aoi Azarashi chapter 1 . 2/25/2008
aw cute! -.-
Yami-no-Hikari-7 chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
Loved it. _
Hoku ala chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
Nice! I could picture Ryoma in a book store asking that to well.

Wonderful job!
RebeccasanFujiEijiLVR chapter 1 . 10/2/2007
practice does make perfect!
Bloom Flower chapter 1 . 6/25/2007
That was nice. Ryoma seems to get what he wants. Spoiled little prince.
maryjaneleaf chapter 1 . 5/31/2007
That was the hottest... non-lemon[?] fic ever!

Keep up the good work!
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