Reviews for The Dichotomy of Namikaze Naruto
Guest chapter 5 . 9/26
I hate Sakura. Kakashi isn’t training them so what naruto did is correct since he’s expected to put his life in her hands, she better be competent.
LadyDoragon chapter 5 . 7/10
I know it's been a good while since this story was actively written but I just had to get my explanation out there. Anyway, I definitely can understand why some people thought that Naruto shouldn't be able to master tree walking exercise by having 300 shadow clones learn to barely run up halfway up a tree and I agree with this opinion. Please take notice that I'm not saying that 300 clones wouldn't be enough to learn that. What I have issue with is the "barley halfway up the tree" part. So basically it's the way Naruto applied those 300 clones that's the problem. You see it doesn't really matter much how many clones Naruto applied to learning, they started from the same point and their experiences and conclusions largely overlap as they are the same person with largely identical thoughts and approaches. Any deviations from the overlap would logically be rarer the more clones you apply to the same task from the same starting point. That means it takes increasingly more clones to get a new conclusion and this increase escalates more and more severely the bigger number of the clones applied is. It's simply an inefficient approach to a task. I mean, imagine drawing again and again the contours of the very same sketch. You might get really good at drawing those sketch contours but you won't be all that grood at shading the sketch even though drawing contours is the begging of drawing a sketch. I hope that was a good enough comparison. Anyway, a far more efficient application of the clones would be to make the clones by a lot smaller batches (10 to 50 but it's difficult to determine the ideal number on guesswork alone and we are talking about a fictional scenario anyway). Each batch would be dispelled before another one would start which would allow each following batch to start knowing more and more about the exercise and how to do it better. That's why the progress would logically be far greater in comparison to a mass of clones starting from the same point and ending at the same time.
An even more efficient method would require dispelled clone's memories to return not just to the original but also other remaining clones and I don't remember anymore if that's canon. Basically you would check clones progress in certain intervals and dispell those who produce best results so their superior experience is shared between the rest of the clones so they can progress from that point instead of trying to get to it.
kenjutsulover chapter 13 . 7/9
Please please please dont take too long to put out the next chapter.
FANofNARU chapter 5 . 6/21
the way you show how Kakashi reacted to Naruto is not good and how rude he is to Naruto also, Mr. author you just disappointed me if nothing more , you are just showing biasness towards Naruto if nothing more , so i suggest whether you makeup for it or you should stop writing this story
Taif chapter 13 . 3/9
What happened man? why did you drop the fic?
Guest chapter 5 . 3/8
The end of ch 5 was kinda ass ngl fuck sakura
HyperA2019 chapter 13 . 2/17
Looking forward to Chapter 14.
MASK3D-B4TT4LION chapter 3 . 10/2/2022
Grizzly98 chapter 13 . 9/21/2022
*does a spit take* Holy shit! Why did you have to go and end it there? This is such an amazing story.
Guest chapter 6 . 9/8/2022
Ugh. I hate harems! But this fic is good enough that I’ll stick it out…
Guest chapter 5 . 9/8/2022
Eek, is religion leaking into this story?
Guest chapter 4 . 9/8/2022
Why is this abandoned?
Guest chapter 3 . 9/8/2022
Kyuubi is like… thousands of years old. Her being romantically involved with Naruto is..not good.
Guest chapter 2 . 9/8/2022
Wow! Naruto being an Uchiha and his mother’s identity is such a twist.
The only issue I have with this fic is that it’s abandoned and this: “It required for the user to give up their own life to an eternity of battle within the death god's stomach with the soul they sealed away.”
I don’t like the idea of someone, even Minato, battling the Kyuubi for eternity. After death, even. It’s undeserving, doesn’t fit, and is excessively religious.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/8/2022
I love this so much! Wish it was longer, though… Kyuubi being a girl is a unique touch.
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