good

Aaand here we go. The MC fainted because he heard his mother was Uchiha.

Seriously? How fucking childish do you have to be to write something like this? Fainting? Really? Is the MC that pathetic? I guess he is.

No wonder considering the author.

...

Lol. Sorry for being an utter bastard in this review. But I think my comment would drive my point home.

Naruto acts like a wet dream of 15 yo edgy teen, thinking he is so 'fucking' cool.

It's disappointing. This was clearly written by a kid.

"Yes this means that it'll be long, in depth, and full of detail."

*Proeeds to not update in 15 years*

damn... this whole chapter was insane 0_0. one if the better waves arcs I've ever read. shame there hasnt been a update in nearly 15 years. guess something happened tonthe author?

your weird

really love this story can't wait for new chapters

Looking forward to Chapter 14.

Hello, the storry is well written, but it deviates too much from canon for me, so I will stop reading it.

I hate Sakura. Kakashi isn’t training them so what naruto did is correct since he’s expected to put his life in her hands, she better be competent.

I know it's been a good while since this story was actively written but I just had to get my explanation out there. Anyway, I definitely can understand why some people thought that Naruto shouldn't be able to master tree walking exercise by having 300 shadow clones learn to barely run up halfway up a tree and I agree with this opinion. Please take notice that I'm not saying that 300 clones wouldn't be enough to learn that. What I have issue with is the "barley halfway up the tree" part. So basically it's the way Naruto applied those 300 clones that's the problem. You see it doesn't really matter much how many clones Naruto applied to learning, they started from the same point and their experiences and conclusions largely overlap as they are the same person with largely identical thoughts and approaches. Any deviations from the overlap would logically be rarer the more clones you apply to the same task from the same starting point. That means it takes increasingly more clones to get a new conclusion and this increase escalates more and more severely the bigger number of the clones applied is. It's simply an inefficient approach to a task. I mean, imagine drawing again and again the contours of the very same sketch. You might get really good at drawing those sketch contours but you won't be all that grood at shading the sketch even though drawing contours is the begging of drawing a sketch. I hope that was a good enough comparison. Anyway, a far more efficient application of the clones would be to make the clones by a lot smaller batches (10 to 50 but it's difficult to determine the ideal number on guesswork alone and we are talking about a fictional scenario anyway). Each batch would be dispelled before another one would start which would allow each following batch to start knowing more and more about the exercise and how to do it better. That's why the progress would logically be far greater in comparison to a mass of clones starting from the same point and ending at the same time.
An even more efficient method would require dispelled clone's memories to return not just to the original but also other remaining clones and I don't remember anymore if that's canon. Basically you would check clones progress in certain intervals and dispell those who produce best results so their superior experience is shared between the rest of the clones so they can progress from that point instead of trying to get to it.

Please please please dont take too long to put out the next chapter.

the way you show how Kakashi reacted to Naruto is not good and how rude he is to Naruto also, Mr. author you just disappointed me if nothing more , you are just showing biasness towards Naruto if nothing more , so i suggest whether you makeup for it or you should stop writing this story

What happened man? why did you drop the fic?

The end of ch 5 was kinda ass ngl fuck sakura