| Reviews for The Dichotomy of Namikaze Naruto |
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   nitewolf423 chapter 3 . 7/27/2017 Hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe |
| nitewolf423 chapter 2 . 7/27/2017 This is awesome please continue this |
| The Man Sitting Under A Tree chapter 13 . 7/18/2017 Aaaannnd... it"s least give me a cookie. |
| jangoman1579 chapter 2 . 7/3/2017 I hate this fic now. Just for the fact that you made Naruto an Uchiha. You insult the Uzumaki name by doing this. |
| Animewa11er chapter 8 . 7/1/2017 cool |
| Logich chapter 13 . 5/16/2017 Easy men |
| Kyattogaaru chapter 13 . 5/12/2017 You. Are. Fucking. UGHSBKQMWKS OXNSKSMXID. HOW DARE YOU STOP IN THIS KIND OF MOMENT? HOW?! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT THE FUCK HAPPENED. RIGHT NOW. GIMMIE MORE. MOOOREEEEE. DID TOU HEAR ME? GIVE. ME. MORE. |
| OtakuReaderForever chapter 1 . 4/7/2017 This story is freaking awesome cool whatever goes beyond this words P.S I want Naruto to be freaking awesomely powerful in a cool way thanks! P.P.S I want it to be like Sasuke and Sakura BFF FOREVER! |
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/18/2017 worst fic ever don't read |
| Guest chapter 5 . 3/18/2017 went realy shit at the end fuck you you cunt worst fic ever don't read this shit fic |
| Guest chapter 13 . 2/11/2017 This fanfic is FUCKING AWESOME! |
| powermachine79 chapter 13 . 1/18/2017 great story hope to read more sometime :) |
| Oblivion196 chapter 13 . 1/18/2017 I loved this! More! |
| death390 chapter 13 . 1/16/2017 Gods I hope there is a sequel or something this was not bad |
| YakAge chapter 13 . 12/6/2016 To be honest, I have my problems with this one. It's not that it's badly written, not that it's uninteresting, or the story isn't good enough. But you fall into the very same traps many authors do: Naruto is too strong, he is too important, and you are too wordy with your many descriptions. One of your AN's said that you dismiss critique about your lengthy descriptions because you want people to envision your characters. I agree. But there is literally no point to describing characters in 500 words when they are EXACTLY the same way as in canon. You claim that you don't want to engage in lengthy descriptions about new skills when the fighting starts, yet you waste about 150k words about (1) Naruto changing (2) Naruto learning (3) Sasuke changing (4) A few people taking note of him (5) Naruto getting stronger. That's pretty much it. To put it bluntly: it's tedious and boring to read about someone's progress without any plot. The short appearances of Kabuto, Danzo or Orochimaru don't cut it. You obviously have the capacity to write good stories, the flow of the chapters is good, I like how you make great strides to ensure that every dumbass notices the character development, your sentences and paragraphs are very nice to read and entice the reader to go on. But somehow, I think the problems lies in the planning of the story. The execution is good, the idea is good, but the planning falls short and kind of wastes the whole potential it had. It's really a shame. |