Please continue
Love every part about the story

kakashi telling naruto that sakura will learn her lesson over the course of her career as a ninja and for naruto to do nothing is just like him saying "she will nearly be killed in the field and either she will learn her lesson or be killed and she will have no one to blame but herself" personally that situation just made me HATE kakashi as he is basically forcing naruto to not help sakura like he WANTS her to be useless until either she gets killed or gets her teammated killed and it kinda pisses me off to see one of my favorite characters from the anime act like he WANTS one of his team to die cause he didnt try to correct sakura's mindset or let naruto do it, but in all a great fic so far otherwise

That was genius. Totally mind-blown.

Good but I am still waiting for more. As you said "I said it in the second chapter, didn't I? Come hell or high water, this thing will be finished. It might just take longer sometimes than you might want, or I might want. Life can be a bitch like that."
from 2009 till 2021 still waiting.

Why u made naruto talk to iruka u fucked up your whole fanfic (not to be rude).

Did this fool die in the middle of writing this? I always wonder how many stories stopped because the author died

I just don't understand how someone can include so many sets of elipses in a story and not notice anything wrong. It seems like there's at least two in every bit of dialog.

There's an extreme abundance of italics in this first chapter; it's jarring. The more you use italics, the less effective they become: repeating the same general sentiment, italicized both times, is not only redundant, but also distractingit pulls you away from the story. I think that something that "reeked of fear" would just smell like urine. There's a distinct overuse of elipses, as well; there should not be three sets of elipses in a single paragraph.

West

damn I really hope this continues wanna see what happens next

man I wish there was more!

Too many info dumps disguised as 'dialogues'. The worst (and for some idiotic reason very popular among fanfic writers) form of world-building. Most of the time, unnecessary.
A somewhat good premise there to be ruined by the popular 'let's make every other character an utter idiot to make our MC more awesome' trope.
No real plot, except those same info dumps.
By the time this story kicks off (which I don't know if it does, I am choosing to drop this), the reader will have skipped or hatefully read half the story.

Lmao “he might just lose it and go Itachi all over this fucking classroom” that’s absolutely hilarious

and dropped. the moment he was revealed to be a fucking uchiha. and that means fucking sharingan. nope I hate that you went and erased kushina as well.

Hope you finish!