omg this was so good your a fabulous author and I love the choice to change his mother I also love the chosen pairings especially Haku. hope for more

Haha this naruto and sasuke are practically brothers. Although this brings to question why his name is Uzumaki. I mean they could just be using the name of a defunct clan as camouflage but why choose Uzumaki? Also, naruto not being an actual Uzumaki drastically lowers his natural chakra reserves... Which probably doesn't matter, but doesn't it also influence his talent in seals? I suppose the namikaze side might compensate... And what about the uchiha cycle of hatred bs? Please don't make naruto kill someone dear for shits and giggles...

The story is really nice. The genetics bs is almost plausible, but I can't understand the motive behind it. Unless minato in this timeline is an incredible douchebag. Buff naruto is very appealing to me. I almost always end up dropping narutofics where he's a beta pussy with any of his friends and can't assert himself unless it's to do shonen protagonist things. I hope you explain what the black eyes are for. Far as I know, neither of his parents sported that color.

Why must you curse us with not continuing this writing, I'm a victim in one of your plays may you wake up and feel pain.

Just pointing out the person below me sounds so much like Bakugo? Like really, showing that they care but form it into a mix of crude words and hate is so like him. You tsundere~

Imagine being so brain dead that you abandoned this. Hope you fucking died.

Amazingly written. I’m sad you never continued it

I mean to be fair the nine tails is more powerful then orochimaru

No wonder you abandoned this story, you realized that you ruined it with this chapter! Good start, good ideas (mostly) but then you hit the crack pipe and screwed the pooch. Very disappointing!

11 year cliffy... you evil, evil person you. I hope your muse comes back to this at some point.

I really shouldn’t be adding to the already large pile comments for a Really dead fic from 2009. It feels though, that this was more of a writing exercise than fiction. Long essays for chapters with very little plot. And more twists and turns for the sake of plot.
I wished I had skipped ahead instead of wasting my time.

Well can't say I enjoyed it.
The first ch. was already hard to take with the kuuby bitching and fucking with Naruto, also I don't know how she can just alter him so completely without the seal. Being broken. Sadly the wtoy progresse not to my liking, from the stupid desisions Naruto makes to him getting fuck over buy to many people.

Not bad story but not my cup of tea

Release the next chapter damnit

Great. Because one brooding uchiha wasn't enough

the angel and hell is stupid concept seriously, and well this is trash and i hope he'll be smart but nahhh i tell the whole world mysecret so praise me fack stupid naruto