|Reviews for Bad Karma|
| SixMagnitudeGirl chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
Hahahahaha your story was really funny!
I think you could have done a sequel I want to know what could
Takumi feel Akira being a model hahahahahahahahh
Nao, Chie, Aoi and Nao are really funny!
| KazeNoSakura chapter 1 . 7/5/2008
Hahaha! This was an awesome one shot! I laughed my butt off from beginning to end! I had a feeling that something weird like that was going to happen. Takumi did say 'What goes around comes around." Hehehe, that's karma for you!
Great job with everything! I didn't see any OOC and it was well written! I think I'll end up reading this more than once! :D
| Shainareth chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
This story make me laugh a lot, really. I love it! I think the character are IC and I think you made a good job!
| Couciec chapter 1 . 9/9/2007
You already know how much I love this story from DA, but I'm reviewing here again. -
The story is simply hilarious, from the opening scene to the comment on Akria's legs. xD I enjoyed it oh-so-much, and continue to, seeing as I re-read it all the time. 3
| xgaugaux chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
very cute and funnie, but alittle (just alittle) out of charactor, tho i cant rele critizis cause mines a bit out of charactor
| voidfanfic chapter 1 . 2/3/2007
A very hilarious story. The closet scene had me grinning and the scene between Takumi and Akira was touching. Great fic.
| renny-chan chapter 1 . 1/27/2007
what goes around comes around. now its Akira's turn. lol. Too bad we cant see what Ishigami is trying to paint. I think Chie, Nao, and Aoi make a great comedy team. lol. i was laughing when they started to mention from an innocent kiss to going all the way. HAHA. and the comment of Aoi being fat. cracked me up. Its cute, i love it! yay! i reviewed! think i deserve a cookie. lol.
| Kryssa's flute chapter 1 . 1/26/2007
_ You're such a love!
Thank you so much for this sweet, and very amusing, bit of fanfiction. I liked the whole set-up, of Akira being in the girls' uniform and Takumi being, ahem, seduced by the art teacher; of Mai and the other girls being thoroughly fascinated with such gossip. Nao's line of 'the nun's going to be heartbroken' nearly made me fall out of my chair with laughter. The fact that everyone's assuming Takumi's virginity is a commodity to be gleefully stolen made me smile through the whole story.
And, of course, I loved the end line. Perhaps Ishigami can get the two of them to pose together. _~ Or would that be a little too much for poor Akira's composure?
Just to let'cha know, my work has banned ffdotnet from being accessed. My review schedule has thus been thrown completely out of whack, and it may be another few days before I get to FWTWB. So, thanks for your patience, and thanks again for this wonderful gift. *hugs all around*
| midorihitomi chapter 1 . 1/26/2007
this was awesome i liked the ending part too! :D thanks for posting this up!
| Sayosi chapter 1 . 1/26/2007
Don't worry, I currently have far too much time on my hands.
Oh my, the opening paragraph. YESH.
Okay, I'm not sure if this holds any grammatical merit, but the comma after the "-it really was good-" looked weird to me.
The poor flowers. Sakomizu's wrath shall befall upon them! -evil cackle-
The closet scene-YESH...again. Chie, you lucky bugger.
"Bars" seems like an odd word choice and I can't quite picture it. I imagined slits of some sort, but I'm not sure.
Chie, Aoi, and Nao make quite the deadly trio, don't they? Deadly in the _best_ of ways, of course.
"... there wasn’t some stock in what Takumi..." I believe "was" is more appropriate for this line.
Ha, poor Akira and her skirt troubles. She really should just go back to the boys' uniform. Much easier that way.
Anyways, this brought me great amusement, so yays.
| Captain Vulcan chapter 1 . 1/26/2007
Ah ha! It looks like I'm the first to review this one. I have to admit it's... different but enjoyable. Heck, I was chuckling the entire time I read this fic. Count on Aoi's, Chie's and Nao's mischievous side to get the best of em. And I don't blame Mai for growling like an agitated beast. I kinda felt for Takumi. I thought Ishigami was going to pull a Micheal Jackson... Gah- scary.
Well, this was fun. I finally burst into laughter when Ishigami complimented Akira's legs. Good job, the usual coming from you, Nao... lin. Ha. It was fleeting and fascinating.