Reviews for In Monstry
JakeCrusher chapter 3 . 7/13/2008
I pictured the soilder that JigglyPuff was talking to as a Slime from Dragon Quest. Just felt like telling you.
Shining Riku chapter 6 . 2/5/2007
Whoa. Now that was a good ending. He he...(Laughs guiltily)

I'm still reading Darkling. It's a very good story, but i'm only half way through.

I loved the part where Luigi got the mean shop keeper fired. Serves the mean grouch right. And the flying bounty hunters was good too! Ha ha ha!

Hmm...I wonder who that ailien was that King N was talking to? And what does he mean by me helping? AH! What did i do!


Ahem...Sorry. It was a very good story. It was good because of the plot, the humor, (ESPECIALLY Jigglypuff!), And basically everything.

Keep up the good work, game2002! Good luck with your next story, ok?

(By the way, i think SSBB is supposed to come out June 1st, but i'm not too sure. CAN'T WAIT!)

-Shining Riku-
Nintendogeek01 chapter 6 . 2/4/2007
Boy Luigi was unusually assertive, oh well that part was funny.

My final thoughts.

The story was very humorous, the hilarious incidents with the God-Awful Rebels, and poor Roy and his lack of girl-grabbing attention in Monstry was funny. And the ending of the story was nice as well since it sets up up for more.

On the other hand, some parts did seem a tad rushed and I thought there was something missing from time to time.

My Final Score: 8.5 out of 10

Well, I am looking forward to more from you later.
Shining Riku chapter 5 . 2/3/2007
Ha ha! Yeah! Go jigglypuff! Fireworks are always fun...but...did anybody tell her those were actually missiles?

Meh, no need. They got the job done. She fried all the baddies...almost. Susanna hit Fukuyu with the van, and then everybody mauled him, so he got waht he was asking for.

And Zelda and Luigi caught dumdumbelumdum. It looked as if he would have blasted Zelda, but Luigi saved the day. (In his own way.)

Now, all that remains to be seen, is how this story is going to wrap up in the end, however long that takes.

Keep up the good work, game2002! EXCELLENT storyline. I can't wait for the next part! See ya next time!

-Shining Riku-
Nintendogeek01 chapter 5 . 2/3/2007
Ha ha ha ha ha ha! That was the most hilarious way to resolve a problem ever! I loved it. Excellent job.
Shining Riku chapter 4 . 2/1/2007
Ouch...I wonder why Dumdumbelumdum is bad? He's a BAD BOY! I hope Zelda survives this one!

Keep up the good work, game2002! You're doing a good job. Can't wait for the next episode!

-Shining Riku-
Nintendogeek01 chapter 4 . 2/1/2007
Jigglypuff sure is funny. It makes me wonder whether she is aware of the captive situation. Well, I am looking forward to the chaos. Wah ha ha ha ha ha ha!
Shining Riku chapter 3 . 1/29/2007
Well, that one rebel got served, when he got hit on the head, if ya know what i mean! LOL!

Sorry, had to say that! Anyways, this isn't looking too good. I'm seeing a little piece of string tying into "Project Gamfax". For those of you who do not know what i am talking about, read the story before this, "Those who deserve beatings"

Well, you're doing a great job, game2002! You have a very nice plot, and i'd love to see where this is going, so wait i must, for the next chapter. See ya next time, and good luck!

-Shining Riku-
Nintendogeek01 chapter 3 . 1/29/2007
Amen for the censoring. And what suspense. I can't wait to find out who the leader is.

The are we there yet part was funny. Ah... the are we there yet moments. Good times, good times.

BTW... a hairless tasmanian devil from Looney Tunes... boy that would be really weird looking. Good chapter. I hope to see more soon.
Nintendogeek01 chapter 2 . 1/28/2007
Poor Roy. I guess he's doomed here.

Ha ha. This chapter was funny. But yes I am curious as to who is surrounding Mr. Binko and Jigglypuff. I must say, Monstry sounds pretty cool. Good chapter.

Note to self, do not drive with Mr. Binko.
Yoshizilla-Rhedosaurus chapter 2 . 1/28/2007
Do Luigi and Mr. game-And-Watch have brain capacities of squirrels? Because they keep slippin', but never notice it...(rim-shot) All right, so that was terrible. BUT...I can say this: i enjoyed seeing Roy getting himself served, since he's ALWAYS getting good attention in other fanfics. And that's all I gotta say, except excellent job!

I bet the men surrounding Mr. Binko and Jigglypuff are the Negatives!



...Oh wait...
Shining Riku chapter 2 . 1/28/2007
Uh oh...That's bad. I was wondering who got bopped by the cup. (i apologize if this is spoiler...)

They look like ursurpers to me, or something. Just a guess.

G&W and Luigi crashing everywhere was funny! I liked that. I feel sorry for Roy. I hope something makes him happy...but who knows?

Well, keep up the good work, game2002! See ya next time!

-Shining Riku-
Yoshizilla-Rhedosaurus chapter 1 . 1/26/2007
This is looking promising! You know what's ironic, Willis? After reading this, I decided to also do a SSBM story that involves the Smashers going to somewhere ironic? Pretty coincidental, huh?

But yes, I like the idea of Luigi, Roy, Link, Zelda, Jigglypuff, Bowser, Kirby, and Mr. Game-And-Watch together. It makes good sense, and Mr. Binko deserves 40 mumbo tokens for being the funniest OC you created. (XD Power Rangers just took the icing on the cake for humor)

Can't wait to see another great chapter! COntinue with the great job, Willis!

BTW, I am also going to re-read Times in 10 Lives Apartment: The Remake, so I can understand a bit more of what's happening and such.

Nintendogeek01 chapter 1 . 1/26/2007
Ha ha! Poor Roy. Boy Mr. Binko sure came up with an interesting greeting for them. I'll have to keep reading this. I think I'm going to like this story.
Shining Riku chapter 1 . 1/26/2007
Hm. Interesting. Good start, i liked the landing part where they were fake attacked, and i can't help but feel sorry for Roy! Anyways, you've been doing a good job as usual, game2002!

I'm excited about the new story, so please, keep up the good work, and update soon, if you can! Til next time!

-Shining Riku-