|Reviews for The Ballad of Mary Sue|
| Taranea chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
hehehe, nice one
wonder whether you got any flames so far...the idea for the plot is really quite original and apart from the odd word repetition ("...in as much detail as he could muster. Sonic took in every detail...") your writing style is cool, too. the last line has a nice double entendre, i liked it a lot
| Kyran chapter 1 . 1/27/2007
Ha, good fun. I would be good to just once see a self insert story when the guy inserted freaks out and gets depressed. Anyway... :)
| Wingless Rain chapter 1 . 1/27/2007
Parodies are supposed to be hilarious for all the wrong reasons, like my own the Harlequin show.
| azngirlchibi chapter 1 . 1/26/2007
Yep. Okay. Sure.
Not much to say...
| Nail Strafer chapter 1 . 1/26/2007
Not original, and rather predictable, but regardless it put a smile on my face when I read it. I honestly did have a fun time with this story. The bit where you mentioned Sonic advising Joust to consider the danger of going after Robotnik was my favorite, especially you mentioning the sword and multiple tails.
| Drab Whistler chapter 1 . 1/26/2007
It felt kinda "meh" and cliched. It's not that it's bad, but everyone here's been through their self-insert moment already, and we've got enough these stories.