Reviews for Taking Care of Myself
swayrabbit chapter 12 . 12/9/2015
Wish you would continue this it's one of my favorite by far
Heritence chapter 1 . 11/10/2015
What do you mean go figure? You realize that it is America that changed it right? And as such it should 'go figure' that in America it is different. (Sorry about the rant I just hate it when someone is blamed for something they didn't do.)
Chuni Luni chapter 12 . 8/6/2015
whooo boy that guys evil!

Please update when you can!
Guest chapter 5 . 10/18/2014
Hell yeah this is amazing email me at and mention this fanfiction please ok
Guest chapter 4 . 10/17/2014
This story is very crazy but in a good way
NatNicole chapter 12 . 10/17/2014
One of the BEST fics ever. 'Nuff said.
Shamrock1100 chapter 12 . 10/15/2014
This breaks my heart that a story as thrilling as this one has been abandoned.
FallingNarwhals chapter 12 . 8/22/2014
When are you updating? I discovered your story when I was surfing through profiles, and I'm in love with it! I love how you made them live in Oceania, ( which is where I live) and getting Sirisus out of jail, the way you made the deathly hallows book epic, and, last, but not least, THE WAY HARRY KINDA HAS HIS DADDY BACK! Weeeeeee!
Mary chapter 12 . 7/20/2014
So I figure you're never going to update this, but in case you ever look back I just wanted to say I loved reading it. Thank you for writing it, even if it never gets finished.
Severus Draconis Potter chapter 12 . 6/25/2014
Interesting, weird...good.. I like this story but its sadly abandoned..Damn
siriusly-a-fangirl chapter 12 . 4/28/2014
I hope you haven't given up on this story. It's really wonderful and I think it's the best I've read so far. There aren't that much of these kind of stories as far as I can tell so I hope you update soon. I really want to find out what happens next. Good Luck! :)
KoreanMusicFan chapter 12 . 3/23/2014
Its been a while since this story was updated. have you gave up on it?
I love the story and its great that little harry has big harry to protect him.
d1x1lady chapter 12 . 10/2/2013
I LOVE this story! So fantastic.
Runecutter chapter 8 . 9/29/2013
Lying down is what you do yourself. "James lay on the couch" (lying, lie, lay, [have] lain) Laying is what somebody else does with another person or an object. "James laid Harry gently down on the bed" (laying, lay, laid, [have] laid, and yes, the present tense of laying is the same as the past tense for lying) or in this story Mr Granger with his missus...
"Dan Granger was carefully laying his wife down on the parlor sofa as his daughter looked on in concern."
And then there is lying (telling the untruth) which goes lie, lied, [have] lied.

Why the sky is blue... well... almost. "The little bits the sky is made out of" don't turn any color, they play ping pong with blue (wavelengths of) light, while the other light goes much more directly to our eyes, making up the yellow ball of the "sun". as the blue part of the light is thrown hence and forth so often it is scattered out pretty evenly about all around us and so the majority of sky looks blue, until sun rises or sinks, then the way for the rays becomes too long and we start seeing the (smaller) portions of red, orange and violet light that get scattered while blue is "eaten" and vanishes. Voila.. instant colorful sunrise/down. Another beautiful side effect of this scattering is also that we get a lot of light even on the shadowy side of things. If it were not for the atmosphere doing so much ping pong with the sun's rays all rooms inside a house, all things under bridges, behind buildings etc would be pitchblack as during the deepest night, that and reflection from all things on the ground of course. (a similar effect works in rainbows, there also doesn't turn anything in another color, rainbows are waterdrops that work as a prism for sunlight that tries to shine through them, and split up light in different directions depending on the wavelength, because of that we see the light always sorted in the same sequence orderly one above the other. The semicircular form and the "floating in the air" bit of it are caused by the angle the light is deflected, we simply get only hit by a small percentage of the whole sky roughly around the shape of a bow... and the lower end doesn't get enough light to divert in our direction kind of a "Lens flare" around the direct sunlight shining on us (Or a searchlight whose outer ring goes all fruit salad))

I'm not sure how I would TRY to explain a precocious little supergenius like Hermione with five and ten months or whatever she is, this effect, but pieces turning blue is not correct and she'd have to unlearn that idea before learning the right one which i assume is suboptimal ;) Probably would go with the ping pong balls and just explain the blue ones like the game the most and the red and yellow ones do not want to play so much and want to come down to the ground much faster and so the blue ones get all the fun and jump all over the place until we see only blue balls coming from all sides. In the evening the way to our eye gets longer and that's to far for the blue balls they are tired and go to bed now the red and orange ones get to play and we see a nice reddish dusk ;) At the morning it's the same, the blue ones sleep in until the way gets short enough so they can jump from bit to bit again without being tired when they reach us. Sounds good?

Oh come on... there are only airheads and shy little victims? Nope, there is a very large and distinctive margin between those two where the NORMAL kids live and have fun. You can spoil 90% of the little rugrats rotten without them becoming completely arrogant and unbearable.. .raising a Dudley, Draco or Ron is almost a piece of art so much you have to do wrong on the way to those precious "results".

The scenes with the kids were stomachhurtingly sweet and cute, and the destruction of the Horcrux-journal was cool.
Runecutter chapter 7 . 9/28/2013
Muffliato is not a disguising spell that exchanges one discussion with another for covering purposes, but makes everything said impossible to understand by changing it into a buzzing sound. A perfect name would be the "droning spell", but as it is one of the Prince's inventions/discoveries it has no second description, just the incantation.

The eventual burning out of the sun will happen round about in four and a half billion years. Almost fifty times longer than you assumed. ;)

He's giving him a pet? What has happened to Mr Tibbles the corral snake? The one Little Harry always wore as a bracelet? Pretty sure young puffskeins are "food" for a medium sized snake...

Hmmm i loved the moment at the swings, but am not quite so comfortable with James pushing the kids to become friends. If at least he had made clear with Albus that they'd go part time into GP12 or somesuch for explanation of their "London trip"... Well no use crying over spilled milk... now they're friends.
And i think you exaggerated his built... you had him earlier "growing like a weed" and used potions so it's a faster than natural process... I'm almost sure i also read a line that he was almost back at normal in a very early chapter and now she takes him for three? A head and her shoulders? That's what at five? ten inches? twelve? Sounds as if it doesn#t fit with the other chapters...
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