Reviews for Reprimand and Reprieve
Lucyole chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
woho really good i like it can you write more oneshots
with them like that i would be very happy aobut that.
*gives you cookies as payment for writing*
123456 chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
"Please read at your own risk. It is incest, meaning family lovemaking."

That means if you don't like Incest, or the pairing, then don't fucking read it. Don't complain or say that it was well written DESPITE the fact that it's "horrible incest that sends you to hell."

Plain and simple.


But the FIC. 3 The fic was good. It wasn't just plain smut. I felt that it made sense. A lot of fics I see, I love them if they are more situational than breaking character. And I liked it. 333333 Moar plz.
Master Lisdt chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
Oh my god! Its like its right and wrong at the same time. Hahaha xP
samurai89 chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
This is so wrong!

*reads story*

This is so right!
Losing Control Of Myself chapter 1 . 7/29/2007
no...of all the people to lose Ren-kun to...*faints*

::poke:: ::poke:: Choco: I think you killed her... ::poke::

poke me one more time and die.

C:... ::poke::

ARGH! *rips choco's throat out with teeth* ISN'T IT BAD ENOUGH I LOST REN-KUN! LEAVE ME ALONE!

*rest of cast backs away*
Helaina chapter 1 . 4/28/2007
I absolutly adore the Ren and Jun pairing, and it is a deffinite shame that there are so few stories about them and their love. The whole intimacy scene was very well written and heartfelt instead of being too steamy. So, thank you for supporting and writing about Ren and Jun.
Jezebel Parks chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
Finally! Decent, well-written, RenJun goodness! *gives you a cookie* I hope you write more like this
Guest chapter 1 . 3/14/2007
I WILL HAVE A LOVELY LIFE! thank you so so so so! much! i love RenJun! Its so perfect!
pluckedwings chapter 1 . 1/31/2007
Destiny, you know that incest is one huge sin, correct? You will probably be sent to rot in Hell if you do not beg for forgiveness from the Lord. I'm simply reminding you to pray before sleeping tonight, alright? Don't chuck anything at me, I really don't mean an insults, unlike the before-hand flamers.

Other than that, the plot was brilliant, I don't think Mahrie appreciated the blatant geniusm enough. Do write less "hardcore" (as you pornography fans call it) writing in the future and I can almost guarantee your passage into the Reward.

Yours with deepest admiration,


(I added everything simply because I don't like blanks)
hxrpwnage chapter 1 . 1/31/2007




*adds to favourites*

Hexagonistic chapter 1 . 1/31/2007

Normally, I seriously don't approve of incest, but your story, was like, so sweet that I could not help but support it. Death to all flamers! I shall roast them myself for you, Dreamz. Sorry, I'm the same with complete strangers...probably freaking you out. great story!
fucking sexy story chapter 1 . 1/30/2007
read the name. thanks for writing this. write more.
lolsquare chapter 1 . 1/30/2007
you can gues whoo this iz.

love you and your work -smooch-!
31334 chapter 1 . 1/30/2007
Brain is fried. GREAT STORY! I want more, more, more, more! Please write some $# *!%#* more!
mahrie chapter 1 . 1/30/2007
Hey Doll,

I love your sexy story...I love how Ren got to taste Jun! That just invoked everything! And what better than to top it off with a kiss so Jun can taste how delicious she is. M... (laughs nervously) I think those state preparation exams are driving me off the deep end...but no matter-congrats on getting Arti to review your story! Especially with it being NC-17 and all, I'm amazed she wasn't backed off by the warning! Somehow, I have the weirdest feeling that you somehow bribed her. And you posted it on Lunar Dream, which makes it all the funnier, I can't wait until Matt, Sam, and Nathan read this. They'll be clawing their eyes out for weeks after this ordeal!

Now, onto the actual story (putting all discussion aside), the spelling was superb, I could not locate any errors so to speak (I skimmed through though, so no guarantees) nor could I find and typos. The actual plot unwinds itself perfectly at just the right pace. If you've ever read a sexfic in which the character were all like: "I'm depressed!" "Let's have sex!" "Yay!" "sounds of lovemaking" You'll know what I'm talking about. The speed was great and was thoroughly enforced by Jun repeatedly questioning her sanity. That would be hilarious if the situation were proper. Just imagine...I would be nabbing my hankerchief if it were so. The actual sex/smut was detailed and gorgeous too, I'm pretty sure most of the readers almost-climaxed while reading this. But one thing you seriously need to lay off of the climaxing scene because as 'foxxy,' (whoever she is) said, you use it too much. But I really wouldn't call this porno, because it's light compared to what people might actually do, especially with the lack of masochism. But it wouldn't really fit the title, eh? Lastly, I love your title: Addicting Intimacy. It describes how Jun reacts to Ren perfectly; she's stuck on him after the first kiss. That's a truly fitting depiction of what their relationship is. I'll assume Ren has the same thing going on, because the fangirl within would kill if it were any other way.

I hope your story makes way for many responses, good or bad, and I hope it truly paves a new way for you to write your famous/infamous sexfics (which I might add, I will look forward to reading/watching Sam/Nathan/Matt's reaction to your fanfiction). Thank you for posting this on FFN (as much as I hate acronyms...) and as Arti says: WRITE ON!


Mahrie Allarton

P.S. This will be the longest review you have ever recieved in your history of writing. I guarantee this with my semester grade and I challenge anyone to try and top this.
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