Reviews for Train Ride Home
tsukinoyume11 chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
LOL But I didn't understand something. Why is Fuji's hand suddenly cold?
sh4dee chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
Quite good. I'm wasn't very fond of your first person narration style... but it still came across quite well, so nice story. Interesting, and I hope you'll write more! Keep up :)
AquaJet chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
hehe this is a very interesting one-shot. I like it alot!

good job!

Tuna Sadist chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
Kya...this is really cute.
xx.DotDotBoom chapter 1 . 9/26/2007

This is one of the first FujiOC fics that caught my five year old like attention span. Loved it!
Demon-horse99 chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
You HAVE to write more FujiOC stuff! it is so good...
lotus head chapter 1 . 4/27/2007
ROFL that story was great. *hearts*
ahgwa chapter 1 . 4/19/2007

need i say more?
Jewels chapter 1 . 4/17/2007
Cute and what a funny girl :D
SeirenTheReader chapter 1 . 2/16/2007
One word : EH? ... OK not not really the real word is CUTE!
Purple'n'Feather24 chapter 1 . 1/28/2007
Purple: sque that was a good fic romance with humour is what i like XD hope you write another one like this!
acyp chapter 1 . 1/27/2007
LMFAO! You're another 1st PoV writer that writes, well, really good. You're descriptions are nice. And the story was funny too. Keep it up ehehe.
Yoshiko Hatake chapter 1 . 1/27/2007
O_O That was good! XD Go first person! XD I never watched Prince of Tennis…weird…his eyes are closed?
Khmer-Angel chapter 1 . 1/27/2007
Ak that was so cool!
Reviewer chapter 1 . 1/27/2007
What a unique way to do an OC story! You really don't need all the detail about the OC anyway; the story, in first person, works the way it is written. Extraneous details would have gotten in the way of the narrative. This was different and interesting and funny. I have been so disappointed with PoT fanfiction lately, and I liked this. Thanks for sharing.
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