Reviews for surprise
Not G. Ivingname chapter 1 . 12/25/2007
what just happened? BB pored tea on Raven and she started to make out with him? why would RAVEN do that? your stories keep getting more unlikely
x-adlanta-x chapter 1 . 8/6/2007
well it seems all of my storys keep on gettin bad comments so im stopping wrighting forever im sorry to the 'very' few people who liked my storys but i think its for the best i dont wright anymore and i am so sorry i was unable to meet everybody eles standers and if i shamed fanfiction and for this i am so so so sorry i would just like to say a small thanks to tom my best friend the one that give me hope of wrighting storys and he wirght half of most of my storys well i guess this is goodbye sorry for any disconfort i may have caused u :'( x
beautifulpurpleflame chapter 1 . 1/27/2007
Very cute and not bad at all for a first story. Only thing I can say is work on grammar. Take a look at how other stories are set up and you should be fine. Hurray for BBxRae!