Reviews for Untouchable
DayMoon89 chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
I absolutely love all three of these, they are masterpieces, and you are a great writer. Are you going to make a fourth, I really hope so these are really good.
Dreaming-Of-A-Nightmare chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
oh... *soft expression on face*

so melancholy, and yet so lovely.

cheers. :D
Nightly Halo chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
aww...that was sad.
Pen-Name-Kitsune-chan chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
This one was really sad...

Luv'd it still!
starkiest chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
Did you use that last italicized part in another one of your stories? I've read that before. I don't know if you used it in another, you copied it from someone, or they copied it from you... I'm looking but I can't find the other fanfiction that I read.

If it does belong to you, I thought you should know someone copied it.

If I'm mistaken and you've used it again in a different one, forgive me!
Ryuuko1 chapter 1 . 6/9/2007
extremely cute. i hope you continue in this series!
naruto0616 chapter 1 . 4/15/2007
Very ggod. But it was confusing. But I got it in the last 2 scenes. Anyway, I think there should be a squil cause it kinda ended fast.
TheUndertone chapter 1 . 2/23/2007
Cute and sad
HanChan chapter 1 . 1/28/2007
Sweet and sad. They do have a strange relationship don't they? It's a pity they can't tell each other how they feel. You made me cry!