Reviews for His Undoing
Guest chapter 1 . 6/12
Arousingly hot..
SakurakoUchiha chapter 1 . 5/8
Love it..
Forgotten Lost Ancient chapter 1 . 4/8
oh my jesus
BeNICEeatRICExx chapter 1 . 10/12/2016
Loved it. I loved the three different parts. Super creative and written so well!
JeannyD chapter 1 . 4/19/2014
Girrrrrrl... love your stories ;)
geninja chapter 1 . 4/10/2013
I loved it, short, sharp and sweet. More please? xx
JustAnotherReader2 chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
I liked it very much :)
I also liked how you put Kakashi's thoughts into this, there's not much stories with his point of view
Adonna2424 chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
Really nice, I'm surprised this fic doesn't have more favorites/reviews. Although it is short, it gives an amazing highlight of the relationship between them, Kakashi's thoughts on it, and some of the events that led up to this tasty little lemon. I have to say the only fault I had of the work was that I wished it wouldn't end. Must Read and I'm definitely faving this author-thank you so much!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
OMG! HOT! Luvd it!
Inume-blue chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
I like it. I love this paring I think they are perfect for eachother. :)
Mindy swarm chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
All I can say is.

Thank you.
Mindy swarm chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
All I can say is.

Thank you.
DirectionOfTime chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
Hey, excellent work on this story, I thought it was really well done with great interplay (lol . .) between the past/present and thoughts. The lack of dialogue worked perfectly too and seemed to really emphasize the sort of danger/teasing sense (I at least) got from reading it where all his thoughts are running through his head, yet at the same time feel almost 'past tense'. All in all, very well done :D ! Each little section was a good length and the dispersal of 'past tense' was really good too! (At least in my humble opinion lol) Keep up the good work!
TheMissusHara chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
Cripes, mate, that was amazing! You made Kakashi sound so awesome in bed...

*Huggles Kakashi* I bet he is...
kdandsheela chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
This has defently deen one of the better lemons I have read. I'm not a big Kakasaku fan but you have done it greatly. Most Kakasaku lemons don't mention the problems of this pair, such as the age difference and formor student/teacher relationship they had, by which Nottoca has expressed creativly though Kakashi's thoughts. Very sexy, very unique, very good. Three cheers for "His Undoing".
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