Reviews for A merry war Betwixt Them
James Birdsong chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
Nice. Great
fan boy for rongo chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
nice an you really should continue this there are so few storys of this eries it would be a sham eto stop one now
Wicked White Queen chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
Okay, I'm a couple of years late, but I loved this fic. Sweet and sexy and funny and just great.

It's probably too late, but if you are still considering writing more for this fic, well, that would just be great.
Kairan1979 chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
I liked it.

The story is a good, and you pictured Melissa very in character. She always compared Louie with her ideal of Champion, but we all know that there is no such thing as ideal Champion. And she always fought her attraction to Louie.

Thanks!
1v2 chapter 1 . 5/19/2008
this is a great fic please continue it i would like to know where louie goes and what Melissa thinks about the bet that Genie and Merrill made.
avis de rapina chapter 1 . 1/30/2007
I like the premise.

Melissa finally starts to admit that it might just be as she would will it.

I hope that you continue this story.