|Reviews for To take back everything|
| tsubakiyuzuki chapter 1 . 7/10
That was a really good story. Just curious but... of what argument were you thinking when you wrote that?
| MLE chapter 1 . 6/17
You could do an argument where Luffy still loves his father, and Ace is mad because Dragon was never there(subconsciously putting his thoughts of his father on Luffy). Ace says that Dragon abandoned him, he doesn't care, will never return, etc., and Luffy was already on edge. This just cut the last thread. Up to you if you want. It's just an idea. I liked the story. It was really fluffy and defenately a Luffy way of acting, when it comes to forgiveness.
| ilovecartoonsgirl chapter 1 . 10/30/2015
Awwww...This is adorable! And it's that you didn't put the argument in, this way we just imagined what Ace said...Anyway, good job!
| EnixFairy chapter 1 . 8/23/2015
They could have been on a hunt and they could be low on food. And luffy could have gotten distracted. Letting the food go making ace snap. And say something like i wish sabo was here instead of you or your so usel
| Snowstar chapter 1 . 12/19/2014
That was beautiful
| FindingThatDamnedOnePiece chapter 1 . 1/21/2014
Well I guess I will NEVER. Know what ace said :/
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 12/19/2013
..and because he's so nice and prefer to not being alone...
Luffy is Luffy...
Poor little Luffy...
I'm glad Ace finally found him and apologize...! :)
| Animezpeps chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
awwww tooo mgod damn cute
| LuffyGirl chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
I love Luffy and Ace so much! This was cute! Luffy, you're so forgiving! :')
| MarcoAce chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
awwwww ACE AND LUFFY YOU TWO ARE THE CUTEST PEOPLE EVER! this was absolutely adorableeeee 3 awesome job!
| Lyneel chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
sweet, with a good ending line :)
| Holmesz chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
Aww now that is some brotherly love I can see between Ace and Luffy. Grate job.
| ihazcookee chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
... If I may . . This is just a suggstion for the arguement...
Ace: STOP CALLING ME THAT LUFFY!
Ace: YOUR SUCH A WORTHLESS A EXCUSE FOR A LITTLE BROTHER OUT OF BILLIONS OF PEOPLE IN THE WORLD I HAD TO GET STUCK WITH YOU?
Anyway thats just my personal suggestion I made it out the top of my head _ ... I hope you liek it ?
| tamara johnson chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
um what is it that ace told luffy and do you know and other author who do stories about ace and juffy i liked i alot thoe it was cute
| Airika Hana chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
awesome! ace rocks