|Reviews for To take back everything|
| ilovecartoonsgirl chapter 1 . 10/30
Awwww...This is adorable! And it's that you didn't put the argument in, this way we just imagined what Ace said...Anyway, good job!
| EnixFairy chapter 1 . 8/23
They could have been on a hunt and they could be low on food. And luffy could have gotten distracted. Letting the food go making ace snap. And say something like i wish sabo was here instead of you or your so usel
| Snowstar chapter 1 . 12/19/2014
That was beautiful
| FindingThatDamnedOnePiece chapter 1 . 1/21/2014
Well I guess I will NEVER. Know what ace said :/
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 12/19/2013
..and because he's so nice and prefer to not being alone...
Luffy is Luffy...
Poor little Luffy...
I'm glad Ace finally found him and apologize...! :)
| Animezpeps chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
awwww tooo mgod damn cute
| LuffyGirl chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
I love Luffy and Ace so much! This was cute! Luffy, you're so forgiving! :')
| MarcoAce chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
awwwww ACE AND LUFFY YOU TWO ARE THE CUTEST PEOPLE EVER! this was absolutely adorableeeee 3 awesome job!
| Lyneel chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
sweet, with a good ending line :)
| Holmesz chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
Aww now that is some brotherly love I can see between Ace and Luffy. Grate job.
| ihazcookee chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
... If I may . . This is just a suggstion for the arguement...
Ace: STOP CALLING ME THAT LUFFY!
Ace: YOUR SUCH A WORTHLESS A EXCUSE FOR A LITTLE BROTHER OUT OF BILLIONS OF PEOPLE IN THE WORLD I HAD TO GET STUCK WITH YOU?
Anyway thats just my personal suggestion I made it out the top of my head _ ... I hope you liek it ?
| tamara johnson chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
um what is it that ace told luffy and do you know and other author who do stories about ace and juffy i liked i alot thoe it was cute
| Airika Hana chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
awesome! ace rocks
| things24 chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
I got all excited when I saw the author cuz I regconized you from youtube! Sorry just wanted to let you know. I like the set up. At first I was expecting the arguement, but you can still feel the guilt Ace goes through without even knowing what he said. Good work!
| AngelRin89 chapter 1 . 5/1/2009