Reviews for First and Last
xXDrowningInChocolateXx chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
...*sniff* You have me in tears! Why Alfons! WHy did you have to die! I hated that the most in the whole movie! In my opinion, there should have been no glass hatch thing and Ed should have reached out and grabbed Alfons and pulled him to Amestris too. They also should have stayed there with Al and lived happily ever after! But about your story, even though its making me cry and tugging at my heart strings, I really like it and think it would be interesting if you re-wrote the scenes after this one! *hint hint* lol

~K
me chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
this is so kawaii! omg you make me cry T_T
shokubu chapter 1 . 11/6/2008
wah!

i cry after reading it...

why?why?he had to die...

well that was what the creater want..

ayway i lve the story
Amethyst DragonRider chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
No! *Sob* That was sad...

I liked it, though! Great job! D
FMAlover chapter 1 . 9/14/2007
Oh, my. When I read that last line...I just burst into tears. Very well-written.
HobbitLover4eva chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
Dude, that story is sick...it would be awesome if it weren't for the gayness. I like Alphonse, but let's face it, he's not in love with Ed. I just see them as close friends, the whole lovers thing is stupid.
Alima8314 chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
Wow! That was so... well, it WAS sad, but very well written. I liked it! I cried at the end...
Caspercat22 chapter 1 . 4/20/2007
this fic was so beautiful (wipes away a few tears) i can fully understand why you cried while writing this. i noticed how his smile only faded at the impact of the bullet then returned once more in full force. he must have been really happy that hed sent ed home. now i gotta find some tissues...
azab chapter 1 . 4/13/2007
i liked it
EverKitsune chapter 1 . 3/6/2007
WAAH! Yes I forgive you! Its so sad, but its one that needs to be told! *sobs* Awesome job! I loved this! I cried, i dunno if you consider that a compliment or not, but I cried so had i had to stop reading...why does this pairing have to be so tragically right?
rainismysunshine chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
*sobs uncontainably* too...sad...sad...yaoi! *sobs* but...so...awesome...
Anime Angel Alchemist chapter 1 . 2/15/2007
usually I don't like these types of stories, but this one was just so sweet sounding, I had to read it. That moment between the two was kinda ify on the straightness of Ed though, so I can see how you got this. I'm just glad you wrote it well.
Maya Harrison chapter 1 . 2/4/2007
oh my effing god!im actually bawling right now! so sad...but awesome.